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Akilov Bekhzod is one of the most outstanding students I have ever had in my career. I met him when he was enrolled to our school, and I was amazed by his personality. Despite his young age, he immediately started making a significant contribution to educational and social spheres of the school. During these years, he has been encouraging his classmates to study, do sports, and develop a friendship among them all.
His knowledge, enthusiasm and responsibility make him respectful and lovely student for both students and teachers. He has a significant tutoring experience, thus he can be as highly valued for our school as a teacher. Moreover, another essential characteristic of Bekhzod is altruism. For example, I can recall last winter break, when he was tutoring as volunteer his pupils at school whole day, in order to prepare them for upcoming Physics and Math exams. He indeed worried about them, even if they were not his close friends. Bekhzod has a huge background in science. He participated in a number of national competitions and won the top prizes. He really wants to dedicate his life to science.
Bekhzod participates in many unique activities. In addition to his excellent study performance, he is engaged with snowboarding and basketball. Furthermore, he often talks with me about his experience in voluntary work at the summer camp as a team leader. He talks about many problems that he had faced there and his creative solutions. This makes him a highly developed person in all aspects. Everybody can get on well with him, because he knows how to interact with each person.
Due to having all the necessary skills for successful studying at university, I enthusiastically recommend Bekhzod for college courses, and without a shadow of a doubt I believe that he will be one of the best students at your university.
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