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Good apartment for a family.
This apartment consists of a bedroom, children's room, a dining room, a kitchen, a living room and two bathrooms. The living room is furnished in classical style. In the living room there are a sofa, two armchairs and a chair; they are designed in the same style. There are also two wooden tables and many old pictures there. The Persian carpet lies in the middle of the room, and nice green curtains hang at windows. The kitchen is arranged in modern style. Then there is a dining room there. There are a dining table, chairs, a case and a locker. In one bathroom there are a bath, a toilet and a bowl, in another - too most but only instead of a bath - a shower. In children's room there are a big bed, a computer table, a locker, a soft carpet, a beautiful case, a chair, a big window, plants and many toys. In the hall there is a case for clothes. It is a wardrobe room too.

Прим. : Поздравляю! Самые заметные ошибки - всего лишь неправильное употребление артиклей. Но англичане в них и сами путаются. А лексические сбои - ерунда. Самый заметный -stool в значении "стул". Откуда бы взялась в гостиной табуретка?

stool I [stu:l] n
1.табурет (ка) {табуретка¦табурет}
office stool — высокий табурет
piano stool — вращающийся табурет для рояля
stool of repentance — ист. а) позорный стул в шотландских церквах; б) публичное унижение
2.скамеечка
3.1) стульчак, судно
2) тумбочка для ночного горшка
4.мед.
1) стул, действие кишечника
to go to stool — испражняться
2) обыкн. pl испражнения, стул
5.1) корень или пень, пускающий побеги
stool shoots — корневая поросль
2) растение, с которого взяты черенки или отводки
3) с. -х. отводок, отросток
stool layering — получение отводков
6.= stool pigeon
7.амер. подоконник
аto fall /to sit/ between two stools — сидеть между двух стульев

Просто тупо исправляю ошибки LustForLIfe...:-)

Good apartment for a family.
This apartment consists of a bedroom, children's room, a dining room, a kitchen, a living room and two bathrooms. The living room is furnished in A classical style. In the living room there IS a sofa, two armchairs and a chair; they are designed in the same style. There are also two wooden tables and many old pictures there. A Persian carpet lies in the middle of the room, and nice green curtains hang at windows. The kitchen is arranged in A modern style. Then there is a dining room there. There IS a dining table, chairs, a case and a locker. In THE FIRST bathroom there IS a bath, a toilet and a bowl, in THE OTHER THERE IS MUCH THE SAME, BUT ISTEAD OF OF THE BATH THERE IS A SHOWER. - too most but only instead of a bath - a shower. In THE children's room there IS a big bed, a computer table, a locker, a soft carpet, a beautiful case, a chair, a big window, plants and many toys. In the hall there is a case for clothes.THERE IS a wardrobe room too.