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While filming the sharks ben was attacked by a huge tiger shark. He was lucky to get out of water, but his body was a bleeding mess. He had lost a lot of blood and was in and out of consciousness. The boy had to fly the plane or die from thirst and the hot sun…
Only once Davy had been shown how to fly a plane, but Davy had remembered everything his father had told him. The engine coughing finally awoke Ben. He advised to push the lever forward. Ben also tell Davy to follow the cost and then he fainted again. During the flight everything was ok, but there were some problems when landing. The plane lost air speed because the nose was up. They could crashed into a thousand pieces. Davy hardly make the plane go down and saw a big four-engined plane that was taking off. Ben closed his eyes and when he opened them again the big plane was far. Ben`s plane moved uncontrollably for a while and when at last it stopped dead Ben thought that it was`nt time to give in yet.

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