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There are many kindS of traveling. For example, traveling by air. Many people think that traveling by air IS better than traveling by other means. I think so too, because traveling by air IS much quicker and more comfortable. IT IS not necessary to take meal WITH YOU ABOARD THE PLANE, because all services are included into the ticket price. It is possible to fly TO SOME urgent meetings BY THE PLANE. Also there is A possibility OF admirING transcendental heights
Other people think another way. Some of them prefer traveling by train. FIRSTLY, it is the safest type of transport. SECONDLY, some people can’t afford to buy AN AIR abroad. And if you have AN excess luggage, you must PAY FOR IT. Also some people have air sickNESS. So, I think in another way because it is not convenient to go with other people IN A RESEAVED SESAT and the price of tickets for a compartment IS precisely THE same as the price of tickets aboard the plane.
In conclusion, i WOULD LIKE TO SAY THAT if I went to travel, I would choose traveling by air.

traveling by air IS better than
traveling by air IS much quicker
Other people think IN another way
can’t afford BUYING
Ну это мой личное мнение.

1-kinds
2-for -an- example
3- -is- better
4--is- mush quicker
5-is -a- possibility
6-must -pay for- exess luggage]
7--have- air -sickness-/-are- air sick
Ну а со спеллинг у меня у самой проблемы)))

1) I think so too, because traveling by air IS (пропустили)
2) By the plane it is possible to fly....-it is possible или в начале, или в конце предложения
3) AT First (не IN)
4) some people, без of
5) you must paying ...-просто pay
6) if I went to travel, I would choose traveling by air-не помню точно согласование, но, кажется, там настоящее время должно быть...