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Англичане, проверьте, пожалуйста, текст!!! Если можно, исправьте ошибки. Спасибо заранее.

I have many hobbies and I want tell about my hobbies.
I like roller-blade very much, because it’s interesting and very fanny activity. Sometimes me and friend of my go to roller-blade in the park or just around the city.
And my dog likes roller-blade with me very much; because she rides me sometimes.
I have a next hobby, it is swimming, and I like swimming very much because it’s interesting too.
When does summer come, I become happy, because I meet all best friends of my and we go to the beach together.
We swim in the swimming pool, and we enjoy our meets again.
And also I like to spring in the swimming –pool from platform, I like water! And I have a hobby, I like skiing, its one of my favorite hobbies.
I learn skiing four years ago and it was in Poland.
My hobby is playing tennis too. I play tennis six years; I like this sport very much because it’s moving sport.
So my hobby is riding, because it’s interesting sport and I love animals.
Also I like кататься на коньках, because it makes me happy.
I like all my hobbies so much!!!=))))))
Laura Sadvakassova
Laura Sadvakassova
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Нет, почему же, вполне можно писать о своей собаке, как о ней или о нём.

I have many hobbies and I want TO tell about my hobbies.
I like roller-bladING very much, because it’s AN interesting and very fUnny activity. Sometimes MY friend AND ME go FOR roller-bladING in the park or just around the city.
My dog likes TO roller-blade with me very much; because she rides me sometimes.
I have ONE MORE hobby, it is swimming, and I like swimming very much because it’s interesting too.
When SUMMER COMES, I become happy, because I meet all THE best friends of mINE and we go to the beach together.
We swim in the swimming pool, and we enjoy our meetING again.
And also I like to JUMP in the swimming –pool from THE platform, I like water! And I also have a hobby of skiing, its one of my favorite hobbies.
I learnT skiing four years ago and it was in Poland.
My hobby is playing tennis too. I HAVE BEEN playING tennis FOR six years; I like this sport very much because it’s A moving sport.
So my hobby is riding, because it’s AN interesting sport and I love animals.
Also I like SKATING, because it makes me happy.
I like all OF my hobbies so much!!!=))))))
Алексей Иванов
Алексей Иванов
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Laura Sadvakassova Спасибо большое!
правильно писать funny,собака в англ. не she,а it
Alexa Abilgasanov
Alexa Abilgasanov
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