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Thanks for your letter. I am very happy because of your soon visit. Anyway, the weather in September is warm. The sun is shinning and i am sure it is the best time for coming. But don't forget to bring some sweaters and autumnal jackets.
I am very proud of your mom cos i've tryed to become vegetarian many times. It is very difficult, i think. But anyways, your mom will find here watermelons, melons, pumpkins, apples and even ebonies. By the way, i know a lot of interesting recipes and if you help me, we will surprise your mom by ours culinary talent. ]
Moscow is very interesting city. There are a lot of sights. But first of all i would like to start with Kremlin. It is beautiful attractive place, in other words it is "Heart of Moscow". Then we will gp to the state Tretyakov gallery. You' ll see brilliant artworks which strike the imagination.

If you like Russian borch i hope you' ll like other russian dishes. Have you ever tasted pancakes with cour cream or caviar? You know, Russia is famous for it's saltings so have you ever tryed to cook it by yourself?
And i know you are the one who likes sweets, especially chocolate, but what do you think about honey cake?

Well, i must finish now, it's my turn to cook dinner.
All the best
Danila
Thanks for your letter. I'm very happy because of your soon visit. Anyway, the weather in September is warm and shiny, so i think it is the best time for coming. But don't forget to bring some sweaters and jackets.
I'm very proud of your mom cos i've tryed to become vegetarian many times. It is very difficult, i think. But anyway, your mom can eat there watermelons, melons, pumpkins, apples and even ebonies too. By the way, i know a lot of interesting recipes and if you help me, we will surprise your mom by ours culinary talent. ]
Moscow is very interesting city. There is a lot of sights to see. But first of all i would like to start with Kremlin. It is a beautiful attractive place, in other words it is a heart of Moscow. Then we can visit the Tretyakov gallery. You' ll see many brilliant artworks which strike the imagination.

If you like Russian borch i hope you' ll like other russian dishes. Have you ever tasted pancakes with cour cream or caviar? You know, Russia is famous for its saltings so have you ever tryed to cook it by yourself?
And i know you are the one who likes sweets, especially chocolate, so what do you think about honey cake?

Всё хорошо, пару "опечаток" я исправила по своему)
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autumn jackets
tried
by our
a beautiful attractive place
a "Heart of Moscow"
strike imagination
просто jackets
to become a vegetarian
surprise your mom with our culinary talent
Moscow is a very interesting city

только недочеты, а так очень неплохо.
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