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Dear colleagues!

Welcome to our Intranet place (name..) which we hope you’ll find interesting and informative.
The place that offers new opportunities to you. The place that offers a rare experience to the people who’s communication has always been a broad area of study.
Here you can chat with people about everything, exchange your opinion, find any other bit of information you'd like to study (books, tests and exam materials and more….
The “..name..” provides as well the up to date «Agrocosm» Subsidiary's information about events, achievements and successes of our company in all areas of concern.

Dear colleagues!

Welcome to our Intranet, the ground of new opportunities! Here you may communicate, exchange YOUR opinions, find useful information, study, and teach each other. You will always know everything (=YOU WILL BE ALWAYS IN THE KNOW OF EVENTS...) taking place at any subsidiary of our company THANKS TO this web-site. The Intranet is:

• information about events, achievements, and success of our company;

• things about people we are proud of;

• various practice literature;

• tests and exams.

The Intranet will give you any information about THE work and life in «Agrocosm», your education, progress, AND career move.

PS due to - из-за (обычно со знаком -)
thanks to - благодаря чему-то (со знаком +)
Остальное - на ваше усмотрение: -)