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So travelling in our country and abroad has got their own pros and cons. I'll write an pros of travelling in our own country. At first, our state is one of the largest countries in the world and there you can find many beautiful views. Second, travelling around our country is usually cheaper. Then, you can discover places connected with history of our country. I know only one con of travelling in our own counry is not prestigious. Now I will write an pros of travel in abroad. First, it is always interesting to discover new places. Second, you can try foreign food and learn new ways of life. Third, travelling abroad is a good way to practise a foreign language. But travelling in abroad has got a lot of cons. First, it is very expensive. Second, you must make out a lot of documents. Third you should know official language of this country. And finally, people in abroad may be not friendly.
I think travel in our own country is better then in abroad, because it is “cheap and cheerful”.

Вот мой вариант:
So travelling in our own country and abroad have got their pros and cons. I will write pros of travel in our own country. Firstly, our state is one of the largest country in the world and you can find many beautiful views there. Secondly, travelling about our country is usually cheaper. Thirdly, you can discover places associated with history of our country. I know only one con of travelling in our own counry: it is not prestigious. Now I will write pros of travel abroad. Firstly, it is always interesting to discover new places. Secondly, you can taste foreign food and learn new ways of life. Thirdly, travelling abroad is a good way to practise foreign language. But travel abroad has got a lot of cons. Firstly, it is very expensive. Secondly, you must process a lot of documents. Thirdly you should know official language of this county. And finally people abroad may be not friendly. I think travel in our own country is better then abroad, because it is “cheap and cheerful”.

Пояснения:
Мне совершенно непонятна постановка артикля an перед словом pros. Во-первых, слово pros начинается с согласной, во-вторых, это множественное число.

around our country - это значит "вокруг страны". Обычно, говоря о поездках по стране, используют about.

"места, связанные с историей". Слово connect обозначает прямую, физическую связь, соединение. В переносном смысле правильнее associate.

про abroad вам уже сказали.

"пробовать пищу" - to taste

Гугл действительно переводит "оформлять" как make out. Но вот оформлять документы - process documents или draw documents

меня смущает это - I know only one con travel in our own counry it is not prestigious.
скорее будет так - I know only one con is to travel in our country is not prestigious
здесь - Thirdly you should know official language this county. пропущен of (language of this country)
и еще - abroad без предлога in нужно. is better than abroad

лучше бы сначала русский текст дал .. ты мог просто изложить что то не верно