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-Hi! Are you sleeping? Sorry if I’ve woken you up but hey! Shine and rise!
-Hi Lena! Finally you’ve paid me a visit! I was looking forward to your visit but I didn’t expect that you would arrive today. Let me show you in!
-Thanks. It’s long time no see. You’re a sight for sore eyes! Can you imagine, I was asked out on a date by your friend John!
-Maybe we will come into the living room and talk everything over? Please come in and take your seat. So, why are you so late? I had you over long time ago and I expected you would arrive much earlier.
-I and Mary stopped by many beautiful places on the way here. Besides, it was a startling blizzard so we had to drop in on our friend and we stay there. Sorry for my lateness.
- Don’t worry and take your mind off it. I’m always ready to make you feel at home at my place.
-Thank you!
-So, what did you say about John?
-He asked me out on a date but I turned him down, I think he is a hick and I don’t want seeing him.
-Wow how interesting. By the way I’ve recently run across him the other day.
-Is he in this city?
-I suppose yes, he tagged along you. Don’t pay attention at him, there is such a rat race and it would be better without his annoyance
-You said it! Yeah, I’m so tuckered out from daily routine. I feel like I relive the same day over and over. Daily small talk with strangers, chewing the fat, dashing off to my job every morning and so on.
-Don’t be frustrated! I have nice news for you. There will be a class reunion soon. Will you come over?
-Em, I don’t know when I will have a time off from work and an ability to visit this event.
-Don’t think twice! There will be fun! We will not crushing the party as we used to do, so this time we won’t be showed out.
-Yeah I remember those good old times.
-So, this time we will shoot the breeze about our lives and maybe you will find an eligible bachelor among our ex classmates
-Sounds good. I don’t see why not.
-I hope that Kate will not be at this evening. Remember, she was a real snob at school, a real Prima Donna.
-Yes, totally agree with you! I also remember Steve, who was a nerd. Good company is going!
-Hmm... What do you think? Who will you prefer to come along with us to a cinema?
-Don't even know! May be Kevin, I remember you were friends with him since kindergarten.
-Well no, not him, we haven't spoken to him since then, he betrayed me and struck up dating my girlfriend. I came up with, we take a Leo, and I remember how he was hitting on you. I’ve got an idea. We will take Leo! I remember he wanted to start dating you
-No, please, not him. What if he will get drunk again and reach for me to kiss, no thanks!
-So, but he’ll be able to break the ice in the beginning of our meeting, won’t he? I think he is cheerful.
-We are different and that’s why maybe we have different attitudes to people. I don’t like gamblers and jerks like him.
-Ok I see. Well I hear a horn out of the window. Somebody is waiting for you?
-Oh my Gosh! I’ve got to go! I’ve forgotten about her! I will return soon, ok? I’ll be seing you, then.
-Ok, I’ll sneak a nap and make myself going by the time you’ll return. And we will talk the rest of themes over. See you in a while!