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топик на английском.проверьте ошибки если ине трудно,буду очень благодарна!!

проверьте ошибки если ине трудно,буду очень благодарна!
I have finished school number 65. I study at the Tyumen State Univercity in economics. I dont regret that I chose this profession, because education is interesting and understandable. in my spare time I go in for sports and music. I Have finished music school and I have music education on a piano class. interest in music appeared in early childhood, that’s why I started studying music at 5 years old. I studied English before I went to school. Further I continued my education at school in a second class. I went on these courses of English language for this purpose what to strengthen knowledge and be able to competently speak on English. To be honest I dont speak the English very well, that’s why purpose of my classes is a practice and learning of spoken English. In my opinion, nowadays every self-respecting person should know at least one language besides the Native language to reach any heights in the field of finance and business. That’s why I set a goal to learn it.
Светлана
Светлана
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Бог мой, какие все умные! Столько слов.. .

After graduating from school, I enrolled to read Economics at Tyumen State University. I have no regrets that I have chosen to study this subject as I find lessons both interesting and relatively easy to understand. In my spare time I go to the gym and take music lessons.
My interest in music was obvious from very early age, that is why, after starting piano lessons at the age of five, I have gone on to complete a piano course at a specialist music college.
I have attended English classes in preschool and afterwards I had resumed the language classes as part of my school curriculum.
Honestly speaking, my English language skills are far from perfect, that is why I have chosen to enroll in this class as I believe it would play an important role in improving my conversational English.
I have set myself a goal of being able to freely converse in English language, as I am of the opinion that every individual that has his or her sights set on a successful career in finance should be able to speak at least one foreign language.
Kordely
Kordely
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University. А вообще хреново. Это не править, а переписывать надо.. . Это уровень "Май нэйм из Петя"... Это не английский язык, а pigeon English... Это не электронный переводчик, не надо грязи. Это просто слабое владение иностранным языком. Но четверочку Вам поставят...
Юрий Семеренко
Юрий Семеренко
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После электронного переводчика? Это неблагодарный труд, проще заново с русского на английский перевести, чем править миллион ошибок.
Н=
Нурбек =))
86 640
исправлять нет смысла, переписывайте сразу!
дословный перевод с рус на англ не есть хорошо.
если уж совсем беда, то найдите похожий топик в интернете, который был составлен грамотно, и уже исходя из него составляйте про себя топик
Филипп Филипп
Филипп Филипп
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