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Last weekend four of my friends:John,Jane,Barry and Sue,after a hard work weekdecided to go sailing on the Black Sea.Of course,I would certainly have gonewith them,but a sudden cold made my trip impossible.As a result,I enjoyed onlya story about the adventures of my friends.Anyway,whenthey came to Anapa, travelers listened to the (briefing of the security of openwater - непонятно, о чём Вы) , Checked thegear and went out into the open sea.John could handle a boat perfectly,so thegroup had nothing to fear. The bright sun in the blue sky accompanied theseafarers.The four friends spent half a day in the open sea,admiring the seaviews and enjoying each other’s company.They all got a huge energy boostthat lasted for the whole week.After watching an incredibly beautiful sunset,theypromised each other to repeat the trip, and,tired but satisfied,they wenthome.

Last weekend four of my friends: John, Jane, Barry and Sue, after a week of hard
work decided to go sailing on the Black Sea. Of course, I would have gone with them, but a sudden cold made my trip impossible. As a result, I only enjoyed the story my friends told me about their adventures. Anyway, when they came to Anapa, the travelers were briefed on the security measures on the open water, they checked their equipment and went out into the open sea. John can handle a boat perfectly, so the group had nothing to care for. The bright sun in the blue sky made a pleasant company to the seafarers. The four friends spent half a day in the open sea, admiring tbeautiful seaviews and enjoying each other’s company. They all got a huge energy boost that lasted for a whole week. After watching an incredibly picturesque sunset, they promised each other to go on such a trip again in the future, and, tired but satisfied, went back home.

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