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For the last few years people have been arguing about the internet. Some people think that the internet is bad and harmful.The others believe that it is a common part of the life and it has a lot of positive aspects. Let us look at the advantages and disadvantages of using the internet.
The cause of social communities same as well as all Internet, as earlier television, radio, telegraph - this needs for information. Imperceptibly social networks have become an integral part of social life, and communication in them began to replace to us, many of communication facilities – letters and phone calls.
Now, in the Internet world, the great popularity is found by the social networks dedicated to virtual acquaintance and communicate.These are sites - as facebook, Twitter, LinkedIn, MySpace and others. First of all, users of these sites are involved with infinity of communication.In the majority of communities registration of users is provided - that is on each participant the separate account should be got.During registration, the user must specify some information about themselves for identification (login, password, e-mail address.) Such approach guarantees uniqueness of each participant in certain degree.Thus, Internet users looking for schoolmates, old or new friends, lovers and people who are ready to divide your interests. An example from my own life on the website I found childhood friend,as there has got acquainted with my guy and now communication is in real life. People whose social circle are limited, particularly susceptible to virtual contacts, the Internet has given them the opportunity for new contacts and renewed old ones. Dependence is growing with the popularity of networks, and many people don't notice it, because the social network - it's a great opportunity to self-realization, to show their best side, create the illusion of popularity and significance in life.
Currently, many users don't understand that the information placed by them in social networks, can be found and used by anyone, more often not with good intentions.Their employers, parents, children, spouses, collectors of debts, criminals, law enforcement agencies and other interested persons can find the information on participants of social networks. This information can provide the valuable information on where the citizen can have the open bank account for his name or the registered property. But, on the other hand with social networks is possible to prevent the big acts of terrorism. To find the criminal and save the lieves of many people. There is a set of not resolved questions about whether to trust the personal data online and how to protect yourself against the situations set forth above.
Certainly to get rid of networks is a big step back. I think that as the velocity of propagation networks is necessary to enter culture of using them and to enter a limit on using.Then there will be no fears that people will forget oral speech and communication with relatives will be more interesting. So, don't forget that communication, is a necessary part of our life and it is impossible to subtract it from a habitual course of things.Online communication should remain only addition to usual live dialogue, with its embraces, the smiles, patting on a shoulder, strong hand shakes and hot kisses.