кто хорошо разбирается в английском проверьте ошибки пожалуйста!!! --- >

Once I visited a zoo. It was full of different animals and birds. They were in big cages. All animals were occupied with something. Flamingos were stretching their beautiful wings. Monkeys were jumping at the trees. Tigers were walking in the cage. Bears were playing. You can see animals from various corners of the world only in the zoo. I got a tremendous impression.

Once I VISITED A (THE) zoo. It was full of different animals and birds. They were in big cageS. All animals WERE BEING occupied by (WERE DOING) something. THE Flamingos WERE STRETCHING their beautiful wings. THE Monkeys WERE JUMPIG ONthe trees. THE Tigers WERE WALKING in THEIR cage. THE Bears WERE PLAYING .You can see animals from various corners of the world only in the zoo. I got tremendous impressionS.

А почему все пишут в континиусе, если паст индефинит означает тоже самое, но легче.

Once I visited a zoo. It was full of different animals and birds. They were in big cages. All animals were occupied with something. Flamingos stretched their beautiful wings. Monkeys jumped at the trees. Tigers walked inside the cage. Bears played. You can see animals from defferent corners of the world at the same time only by wisiting a zoo. I got a tremendous impression.

В предпоследнем пр нужно добавить одновременно, потому что зверей ты можешь увидеть где угодно...

нет, континиоус тут лучше. если комментировать лучший ответ (игоряша) , то с тайгерами лучше their cage, с бэерами played with each other, а only in the zoo лучше в начале предложения )

Once I visited a zoo. It was full of different animals and birds. They were in big cages. All animals were occupied with something. Flamingos were stretching their beautiful wings. Monkeys were jumping at the trees. Tigers were walking in a cage. Bears were playing. You can see animals from various corners of the world only in the zoo. I got a tremendous impression.

Once i have visited zoo. Monkeys jumped on the trees. Bears were played.