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1 - Hello, Sveta!
2 - Hello, Tanya!
1 - What country do you want to visit this year?
2 - I want to visit Russia. I would like you to tell me about
this country.
1 - OK, Russia is of course a lovely place to go to. It has so
much to offer. For example, world-famous museums, theatres
and galleries. There are good tourist facilities in Moscow,
St. Petersburg and others cities.
2 - Please, tell me about Moscow!
1 - Moscow is a wonderful city. There are many things to see.
For example, the Tretyakov Gallery, where many works of famous
artists are collected.
2 - I would like to visit this place. And where do you want to travel?
1 - I want to travel to Britain. Could you tell me about this country?
2 - Yes, with a pleasure. Britain is a democratic country. Britain has
a rich history, famous sights and beautiful landscapes. One of sights
is the British Museum. There are exhibitions containing rare paintings,
ancient sculptures, unique books and others sights.
1 - I shall visit it without fail.
2 - Thanks you for the information.
1 - And thanks to you!
2 - bye!
1 - bye.

правильно у Татьяны написано - with pleasure.
There are exhibitions containing rare paintings,
ancient sculptures, unique books and others sights in the British Museum.

1-hello Света
2-hello Таня
1-What (я бы сказала Which) country WOULD YOU LIKE to visit this year? (не надо предлога IN)
2- I WOULD LIKE to visit Russia. COULD YOU TELL me SOME INTERESTING FACTS/SOMETHING about this country.
1-ok, Russia is a lovely place to go to. THERE ARE A LOT OF THINGS TO SEE SUCH world-famous museums, BEAUTIFUL ARCHITECTURE, theaters and galleries. There are good tourist facilities in Moscow, St. Petersburg and others cities.
2- COULD YOU TELL ME MORE ABOUT MOSCOW?
1- Moscow is A wonderful CITY. There are many sights AND CULTURAL ATTRACTIONS(придумайте что нибудь еще) TO EXPLORE/SEE. For example the Tretyakov Gallery WHERE YOU CAN FIND THE BIGGEST DEPOSITORY OF RUSSIAN FINE ART.
2-I would like to visit this place. And where DO you want to go travelLING?
1-I WOULD LIKE TO TRAVEL TO BRITAIN. COULD YOU tell me SOMETHING about this country.
2-Yes, with pleasure.
Britain is a democratic country. Britain, WITH ITS rich history and beautiful landscapes, HAS A LOT OF FAMOUS SIGHTS AND One of THEM is the British mUSEUM. There ARE exhibitions WHICH contain rare paintings, ancient sculptures, unique books and others sights.
1-I WILL DEFINITELY visit IT.
2-ThaNK you for the information.
1-YOU'RE WELCOME.
2-bye.
1-bye.