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Summer holidays is the most expected event of the year for me. When I stay at home in summer, I usually watch TV, surf the net and read books. I adore travelling. I like different countries so I want to visit them all. So far, I have been to Bulgaria, Hungary, Romania and Turkey. When visiting Bulgaria, Hungary and Romania, I travelled a lot around the countries, went sighseeing, walked in the streets and went to several beaches. I liked camping holidays. I enjoyed the view and went swimming, but didn't lie in the sun because I don't like it. In the evening I usually watched movies. My idea of an ideal holiday is a journey to different countries. It was a wonderful summer I am looking forward to the next.

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Summer holidays is the most expected event of the year for me. When I stay at home in summer, I usually watch TV, surf the net and read books. I adore travelling. I like different countries so I want to visit them all. So far, I have been to Bulgaria, Hungary, Romania and Turkey. When visiting Bulgaria, Hungary and Romania, I travelled a lot around the countries, went sighseeing, walked in the streets and went to several beaches. I liked camping holidays. I enjoyed the view and went swimming, but didn't lie in the sun because I don't like it. In the evening I usually watched movies. My idea of an ideal holiday is a journey to different countries. It was a wonderful summer I am looking forward to the next.

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