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Good morning
-Oh Hi
-My name is Dima, I’m a Russian volunteer at the FIFA 2018 World Cup. And my work is to help you with everything you need.
-Nice to meet you, Dima. I’m amazed how friendly and hospitable Russians are. By the way, do you recognize me? I’m Erena Willliani
-Are you a famous tennis player ?
-Not really famous…
-I’m very glad to meet you. I will try my best to make you feel at home in our city.
-It’s so nice of you! So…What are we gonna do?
-Let’s go sightseeing! I’ll show you our local attractions and the most beautiful places, I’m sure you will like it.
-Sounds great! Just give me some time to change my clothes and we are ready to go.
-Sure! I’ll be waiting downstairs.
-Hey, I’m ready! Let’s go!
-Tell me more about yourself, please. There are only programs about your sport-life on our TV and not much about your life outside your career.
-So, I began to play tennis when I was 4. From the moment I took a racket for the first time I realized that I didn’t want to be a blue color or a white color worker. I wanted to be a tennis player. I’m very grateful to my parents and to my couch (his name is Richard Williams) for their help and support.
-Richard Williams… Hm, It sounds familiar. I’ve heard it before.
-It’s not surprising. Excuse me, Where are we going? is this an ancient castle?
-No, this is a Cremlin. It was founded a long time ago and was built for defense.
-Amazing!
-There is an interesting place in Bolshaya Pokrovskaya street . It is called “Salut”. We can taste hamburgers cooked on a fire and also taste a delicious cider.
-It’s a good idea actually! I’m starving.
-Well, here is this place.
-Wow, the decor looks cool! And the music is great!
-I m glad you like it! Take a seat, please. I’ll order some food.
-Hmmm… smells delicious!
-Yes, it does.
-Have you heard about our athletes? Many of them participate in different worldwide competitions and set new Olympic records.
-Of course, I’ve heard about them. I met ...personally and other Russian athletes. I don't think I’ll ever forget Sochi Olympic Games. By the way, do you play any sports?
-Yeah, I’m fond of football but it is only a hobby.
-Are you interested in improving your skills? Who knows, you might reach the same level as myself in the future.
-No, I don't think so. I am not ready to devote my life to sport. I think I’m not as talented as you are.
-Come on! If I can do it you can do it too! Maybe I can help you. I know some Russian coaches who will be happy to meet you
-No thank you. But I will be happy to have you over next time and play football for fun.
-Sounds great! I don’t see why not. If I get an opportunity to visit Russia again, I will take it and come here.
-So, I think it’s time to go to a stadium because the match starts soon
-Yeah, it’s best if we do it now, because it is not too crowded yet.

отличный диалог! вы молодец! (извините, если некоторые фразы сильно переделала, под англоговорящий менталитет, так сказать:)

-Good morning
-Hi
-My name is Dima, I’m a Russian volunteer at the FIFA 2018 World Cup and my work is to help you with whatever you need.
-Nice to meet you, Dima. To tell the truth I’m amazed how affable and hospitable Russians are. By the way, do you recognize me? I’m Erena Willliani
-Are you the famous tennis player ?
-Not really famous…
-I’m really glad to meet you. I will try to do everything I can to make you feel at home in our city.
-It’s so nice of you! So…What are we gonna do?
-Let’s go sightseeing! I’ll show you our local attractions and the most beautiful places, I’m sure you will like it.
-Sounds like a plan! Just give me some time to change my clothes and we can go.
-Sure! I’ll be waiting downstairs.
-Hey, I’m ready! Let’s go!
-Tell me more about yourself, please. On our TV there are only video footages of your game and nothing private.
-So, I began to play tennis since I was 4. From the very moment I took a racquet in my hand I realized that I didn’t want to be a blue color or a white color worker. I wanted to be a tennis player. I’m very grateful to my parents and to my couch whose name is Richard Williams for their help and support.
-Richard Williams… Hm, It’s a familiar name. I’ve already heard it before.
-It’s not surprising. by the way, Where are we going to? Is it an ancient castle?
-No, it’s our Kremlin. It was founded a long time ago and was built for defense.
-Amazing.
-There is one interesting place in Bolshaya Pokrovskaya street. It is called “Salut”. You can try hamburgers which are roasted for you and also a delicious cioder.
-It’s a good idea actually! I’m starving.
-Well, here is this place.
-Wow, it is nicely decorated and the music is great!
-I told you! Take a seat, please. I’ll order something and then come back.
-Hmmm… smells delicious!
-Yes, it does.
-Have you heard about our athletes? Many of them participate in different worldwide competitions and set new Olympic records.
-Of course, I’ve heard about them. I’m personally acquainted with … , … and others. I think I’ll never forget Sochi Olympic Games. By the way, do you practice any kind of sport?
-Yeah, I’m fond of soccer but this is just my hobby.
-Are you interested in improving your skills? Who knows, may be you will reach the same high level as I did.
-No, I am not ready to devote my life to sports. I think I’m not so talented as you are.
-Come on! If I can do it you can do it, too! Maybe I can help you with it. I have some Russian familiar coachs who will be glad to see you.
-No, thank you. But I will glad to meet you next time and play soccer in informal conditions.
-Sounds great! Why not? If there is an opportunity to arrive in Russia again, I will dash off and be here.
-So, I think that it’s time to go to the stadium because the match will begin soon.
-Yeah, it’s better to do it now than later, because it is not crowded so much now.

it’s very good)))