Проверьте пожалуйста грамматические ошибки в следущем переводе с русского на английский

1. My mother-in-law has got many sisters.
2. The sisters of my mother-in-law live in other cities/in an other city.
3. The police have a lot of proof.
5. This clock has an original face.
7. These are pictures of my friends.
10. I like walks when the weather is nice.

1.У моей тещи много сестер.
My mother-in-law HAS got many sisters.
2.Сестры моей тещи живут в другом городе.
My mother-in-law'S SISTERS LIVE in ANOTHER city.
3.У полиции много докозательств.
The police HAS GOT a lot of PRoofs.
4.Возьми эти лыжи.
Take these skis.
5.У этих часов оригенальный циферблат (face).
This clock HAS an original face.
6.Крыши этих домов плоские.
The roofs of these houses are flat.
7.Это фотографии моих друзей.
These are photoS of my friends. THESE ARE MY FRIENDS' PHOTOS.
8.У тебя есть карта мира?
Do you have THE world'S map?
9.У него два больных (bad) зуба.
He has two bad teeth.
10.я люблю гулять в хорошую погоду.
I LIKE TO walk in good weather. I LIKE TO GO FOR A WALK IN GOOD WEATHER.

1) has instead of have got; 2) live or are living instead of lives; 3) has a lot of evidences instead of have a lot of peroofs (proofs!); 4) OK; 5) has instead of have; 6) OK; 7) OK; 8) It's better to use have you instead of do you have; 9) OK; 10) I like to go for a walk or I like to take a walk instead of I lake (like!) walk's.

1) My mother-in-law has got many sisters
2)The sisters of my mother-in-law live in other city.
3)The police have a lot of proofs.
4) Верно
5) This clock has an original face.
6)Верно
7)Верно
8)Верно
9)Верно
10)I like walks when the weather is fine

Что ж так слабо-то?

My mother-in-law has got many sisters.
The sisters of my mother-in-law live in another city.
The police has lots of facts.
This clock has a special dial plate.
These are the photos of my friends.
He's got 2 bad teeth.
I like to have a stroll when the weather is fine .