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Good morning, everyone again. I’d like to present to you country Sweden today. It would be good if you kept any questions until the end. I shall be happy to answer them after the presentation.

I chose this topic because I wanted to find out more about this country. And I find Sweden very beautiful. I wanted to tell other about history, culture, sights of Sweden and more.

At first I founded a lot of information in the internet, books, and magazines. I wrote the most important facts on my computer. Then I founded suitable pictures. I downloaded all this photos on my computer from the Internet. Next I printed them. It was pity that I had only black colour in the printer. I cut out picture and stuck on the yellow piece of paper. I chose a yellow paper because it is one colour of the Sweden flag. I wrote a title with blue colour. Blue is a one colour of the flag, too. Subtitles I wrote with black pan.

At my poster you can see a flag, Coat of arms, and map on the left side. Here you can see different sights of Sweden to example The Kalmar Cathedral, The Djurgården Bridge and Royal Palace. On the right side you can see King of Sweden Carl XVI Gustaf, Parliament House in Stockholm. And here is famous people of Sweden, to example music band ABBA, author Astrid Lindgren.

Now I want to talk some facts about Sweden. Sweden is the land of forests and lakes. Sweden borders with Norway and Finland. At 450,295 square kilometres, Sweden is the third largest country in the European Union by area, with a total population of about 9.4 million. Sweden's capital city is Stockholm, which is also the largest city. Today, Sweden is a constitutional monarchy with a parliamentary democracy form of government and a highly developed economy.

I really enjoyed doing the project. But I have some problems, too. The biggest problem was the search of important facts, because it was very many information.
Good morning, ONCE AGAIN. I’d like to present to you THE country OF Sweden today. It would be good if you kept any questions TILL the end. I WOULD be happy to answer them after the presentation.

I HAVE CHOSEN this topic because I wanted to find out more about this country. And I find Sweden very beautiful. I wanted to tell otherS about history, culture, sights of Sweden and more.

At first I FOUND a lot of information ON the Internet, IN books and magazines. I TYPED the most important facts INTO my computer. Then I FOUND suitable pictures. I downloaded all THESE photos on my computer from the Internet. Next I printed them. It was pity that I had only black colour in the printer. I cut out A picture and stuck IT on A yellow piece of paper. I chose yellow paper because it is one OF THE colourS of the Sweden flag. I wrote a title with blue colour. Blue is one OF THE colourS of the flag, too. Subtitles WERE WRITTEN with black pan.

ON my poster you can see a flag, Coat of arms, and A map on the left side. Here you can see different sights of Sweden, FOR example The Kalmar Cathedral, The Djurgården Bridge and THE Royal Palace. On the right side you can see King of Sweden Carl XVI Gustaf AND THE Parliament House OF Stockholm. And THERE ARE famous people of Sweden, FOR example ABBA MUSIC BAND AND A SWEDISH WRITER Astrid Lindgren.

Now I want to TELL some facts about Sweden. Sweden is A land of forests and lakes. Sweden SHARES borders with Norway and Finland. WITH LAND AREA OF 450,295 square kilometres, Sweden is the third largest country in the European Union by area, with a total population of about 9.4 million. Sweden's capital city is Stockholm, which is also the largest city. Today, Sweden is a constitutional monarchy with a parliamentary democracy form of government and a highly developed economy.

I really enjoyed doing the project. But I have some problems, too. The biggest problem was the search of important facts, because THERE was TOO MUCH information.
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В меру своих знаний исправил, хотя думаю, что покопавшись, можно еще что-то найти.
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-Прошедшая форма от find - FOUND, не founded
-"Например" = FOR example, не "to example"
-Правильно ON the Internet, а не in the Internet
-THE Royal Palace - названия дворцов пишутся с артиклем THE
-кое-где артикль "A" пропущен
yну и там по мелочи, пишете английскими словами по-русски, а англичане по-другому формулируют мысли.
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Павел Сергеев
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1.I’d like to present to you country Sweden today.(to present you) Здесь лучше убрать слово country!
2.Then I founded suitable pictures. (found)
3.I downloaded all this photos on my computer from the Internet.(these вместо this)
4. It was pity that I had only black colour in the printer. (a pity)
5.I chose a yellow paper because it is one colour of the Sweden flag.(I chose a yellow paper because yellow is one of the colors of the Sweden's flag.)
6. Blue is a one colour of the flag, too.(Blue is one color of the color of the flag too.)
7.Subtitles I wrote with black pan. (I wrote subtitles)
8. and map on the left side.(a map)
9.Here you can see different sights of Sweden to example The Kalmar Cathedral, The Djurgården Bridge and Royal Palace.(for example)
10.And here is famous people of Sweden, to example music band ABBA, author Astrid Lindgren. (are famous people;for example)
11.Now I want to talk some facts about Sweden(I want to tell you)
12. because it was very many information. (there were a lot of information)