Подскажите пожалуйста какие ошибки есть в английском тексте?

choose a profession -> choosing a profession
it is hard work - it is a hard job
become a major work, I want to I like my job - непонятно, что имелось в виду
дальше вообще какой-то ..здец

There are forty thousand professions in the world. Choosing a profession is very difficult. I have many interests, so it is difficult to make a choice. Many people say that I could be a good teacher, but it is hard work. I do not want to become a major work in my life (? непонятно, что вы хотели сказать этой фразой), so I doubt that I would become a teacher. However, I would like to work with people. Many people advised me to stay in school after the ninth grade and get a prestigious education. But I want to like my job, so I'm going to try myself in various activities this summer to realize what I'm better suited for. Then I will go to college to obtain professional knowledge and experience.

У вас там куча артиклей отсутствует и время перепутано. Еще раз через весь текст пройдитесь... Перев едите себе каждое слово...

There are more than forty thousand kinds of professions in the world. Choosing a profession is very difficult. I have so many interests that it is difficult for me to make a choice. Many people say that I can be a good teacher but it is hard work. I do not want it to become a major profession in my life. I doubt that I will become a teacher although I like working with people. Some people advise me to stay at school after the ninth grade and continue studying. I don't want to do the job I don't like. So I'm going to try myself in various activities this summer to find out that job would best suit me in the future. Then I am going to do a course at college to obtain professional knowledge and experience.

Во-первых, пишите повестрвование в одном времени ( настоящем, прошлом или будущем). Вы не связываете предложения. Так же как и в русском: Мне нравится то то, ПОТОМУ ЧТО....