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24 June 1914
The clean birdsong and the soft smell of flowers WOKE me up, spreading throughout the house happiness. I opened my eyes with the hope to see something unusual. Believe me or not, but I did. On the toilet table I saw A beautiful rose and A letter. Archibald went to Bristol early morning, to meet the others employees of Royal Flying Corps and to discuss something, which of course is A secret. So I was AT home all along (ALONE?), listenED to silence. I read THE letter with the smile on my face. THE Letter said:

Hi darling.
Do you remember the day when I was coming (CAME) back from Boxing Day in France? Do you remember the day when we went through the wedding terrace and changed our rings? It WAS half a year ago. Yes, we were angry on each other sometimes, but I just want you to know, I will never let you go because I love you, with all my heart. I love you my Agatha Mary Clarissa Christie, you are just mine and nobodY`s else.
Your husband Archibald Christie.

That text was a short one, but it meant a lot to me. We would like to meet each other SOmuch as we did before, but it doesn’t work, job bothers us two. Anyway THE time was showing 5,20. I went into the kitchen. A Newspaper and A cup were laying on the table. I sAt on the chair and looked quickly THROUGH the newspaper. June 23 – The Kiel Canal is reopened (having been deepened) by the Kaiser; the British Fleet under Sir G. Warrender visits; the Kaiser inspects the dreadnought HMS King George V. That’s what first title said. But I didn’t pay much attention to it. I layed aside THE newspaper and washed the cup after THAT I started to cook borscht. THEN I ate it, the hot sun outside was waiting for me. THE Smell of dandelionS around my house WAS fantastic. Nothing more WAS needed just good weather and smile on your face everybody will surely see in Wallinford .

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The clean birdsong and the soft smell of flowers waked me up, spreading happiness throughout the house . I opened my eyes with the hope to see something unusual. Believe me or not, but I did. On the toilet table I saw a beautiful rose and a letter. Archibald went to Bristol early morning, to meet the others employees of Royal Flying Corps and discuss something, which of course was secret. So I was at home all along, listen to the silence. I read the letter with a smile on my face. Letter said:

Hi darling.
Do you remember the day when I was coming back from Boxing Day in France? Do you remember the day when we went through the wedding terrace and changed our rings? It’s been half a year ago. Yes, we were angry on each other sometimes, but I just want you to know, I will never let you go because I love you, with all my heart. I love you my Agatha Mary Clarissa Christie, you are just mine and nobodies else.
Your husband Archibald Christie.