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Английский текст. Есть ли в этом тексте ошибки?

Английский текст. Есть ли в этом тексте ошибки?

When I was a child I liked to do silly things. Once, when I was in the village, I walked around countryside. And later I saw a cow. I decaded to get on it. I didn't know why I wanted it, maybe because I thought that it would be funny. I knew it was dangerous, but I did it. The cow was running very fast. My hair was waving in the wind. This was spectacular. I don't remember how I got off, but after that happening I dedided - I will became equestrian.

After holidays, when I arrived to home from village, I started going to equestrian club. At first it was hard for me, but over time my skills was becoming better and better. Nowadays, I'm very good in horse riding.
Ошибок много. И не только орфографические, артикли и предлоги / послелоги.
С временами тоже плюхи имеются.

will became - ошибка. После will смысловой глагол должен использоваться в 1-й форме (инфинитив без частицы to).

skills was - ошибка. У вас существительное стоит во множественном числе, а глагол - в единственном.

after that happening - странный оборот. Без комментариев.
Динара Абенова
Динара Абенова
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Это нарочно ли в одном слове дважды допущены ошибки? ("deсide")
Сергей Соловьев Случайно написал. С временами нет косяков?
When I was a child I liked to do silly things. Once, when I was in A village, I walked around countryside.[НЕПОНЯТНО] And later I saw a cow[WHERE?]. I decIded to get on it. I didn't know why I wanted it, maybe because I thought that it would be funny. I knew it was dangerous, but I did it. The cow was running very fast. My hair was waving in the wind. IT was spectacular. I don't remember how I got off, but after that [NO happening] I deCided TO BE AN equestrian.

After THE holidays, when I arrived BACK home from THE village, I started going to THE equestrian club. At first it was hard TO me, but over time my skills BECAME better. Nowadays, I'm very good in horse riding.

НЕ ПЛОХО! МОЛОДЕЦ!
Запятые после When I was a child и после I didn't know
Олеся Стенникова(Милованова) Он и не ставил эти ненужные запятые!