Исправил как мог, но прошу тех кто знает английский помочь
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Melbourne is the capital city and the most popular city of the State of Victoria, and the second most populous city in Australia. Melbourne is located on the southeastern tip of mainland Australia. Melbourne is also often called the "sport and cultural capital" of the country, because many sports and cultural events in the life of Australia are held there.
From shopping to history and heritage attractions, parks and gardens, galleries and museums and the great outdoors, there's heaps to discover in Melbourne.
Melbourne is Australia's shopping and fashion capital. Fashion is taken seriously in Melbourne, and whatever your style, you'll find an outlet that suits you. And if you're about to head off to explore Victoria's great outdoors, make sure you drop by one of plethora of outdoor and adventure stores. The best way to do the shopping is on foot, but there's ample reward for tired feet in a fine selection of cafes and pit stops peppered between shops.
You'll be surprised by the variety and energy that characterises nightlife in Victoria. Whether it's drinking at pubs and bars, clubbing the night away at dance venues, or grooving to live music indoors or out, there's plenty going on to keep a night owl entertained.
Melbourne is a perfect city! It is necessarily to visit it.
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Алёнка Найденко
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Melbourne is A capital and the most popular city of the State _ Victoria, BESIDES IT'S the second most populATED city in Australia. Melbourne is located on the south-eastern tip of mainland Australia.IT IS is also often called "sport and cultural capital" of the country, because many sports and cultural events in the life of Australia are held there.
From shopS to historICAL and heritage attractions, parks and gardens, galleries and museums and the great outdoors, there ARE LOTS OF THINGS to BE discoverED in Melbourne.
Melbourne is A shopping and fashion capital OF AUSTRALIA. Fashion is taken seriously in Melbourne, and whatever style YOU'VE GOT, you'll find an outlet that suits you. And if you're about to head off to explore Victoria's great outdoors, make sure you drop by one of plethora of outdoor and adventure stores. The best way to do the shopping is WALKING on foot, but there's ample reward for tired feet in a fine ASSORTMENT of cafes and pit stops peppered between shops.
You'll be surprised by _ variety and energy that characterise_ nightlife in Victoria. Whether it's drinking at pubs and bars, clubbing the night away at dance venues, or grooving to live music indoors or out, there's plenty going on to keep a night owl entertained.
Melbourne is a perfect city! It is necessarY to visit it.
From shopS to historICAL and heritage attractions, parks and gardens, galleries and museums and the great outdoors, there ARE LOTS OF THINGS to BE discoverED in Melbourne.
Melbourne is A shopping and fashion capital OF AUSTRALIA. Fashion is taken seriously in Melbourne, and whatever style YOU'VE GOT, you'll find an outlet that suits you. And if you're about to head off to explore Victoria's great outdoors, make sure you drop by one of plethora of outdoor and adventure stores. The best way to do the shopping is WALKING on foot, but there's ample reward for tired feet in a fine ASSORTMENT of cafes and pit stops peppered between shops.
You'll be surprised by _ variety and energy that characterise_ nightlife in Victoria. Whether it's drinking at pubs and bars, clubbing the night away at dance venues, or grooving to live music indoors or out, there's plenty going on to keep a night owl entertained.
Melbourne is a perfect city! It is necessarY to visit it.
в глаза бросилась только фраза It is necessarily to visit it. По-моему necessarily здесь не очень. На крайняк напишите necessary, а лучше переделайте всю фразу.
Minina Olga
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всё нормально с этим текстом. 100%
Ирина Адыгашева
20 732
лучше сказать не populous, a populated - это более употребительно
опять же более употребительно не sports events, a sporting event
from shopping to history and heritage attractions --> from shops to historical attractions
the great outdoors --> beautiful landscapes
в предложении, начинающемся с "The best way" союз должен быть не but, a, наверное, as
в следующем предложении слово energy не к месту - лучше его вообще убрать
it's necessarily to visit it --> It's necessary to visit it, но лучше It's really worth visiting или You just have to visit it
а что такое outdoor and adventure stores?
и еще можно спросить - а что это за текст? откуда?
опять же более употребительно не sports events, a sporting event
from shopping to history and heritage attractions --> from shops to historical attractions
the great outdoors --> beautiful landscapes
в предложении, начинающемся с "The best way" союз должен быть не but, a, наверное, as
в следующем предложении слово energy не к месту - лучше его вообще убрать
it's necessarily to visit it --> It's necessary to visit it, но лучше It's really worth visiting или You just have to visit it
а что такое outdoor and adventure stores?
и еще можно спросить - а что это за текст? откуда?
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