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ОШИБОК НЕ МАЛО. Может быть, что-то и пропустила.
We all know that our planet has four seasons: winter, summer, autumn and spring. And of course they all have something unique, something special. That makes them different from each other.
Winter is the coldest season of the year. If you look around, you`ll see the snow gently falling from the sky, beautiful trees covered with white shining cloth from snowflakes. Nothing is better than playING winter games outdoors with friends and HAVING a cup of tasty hot chocolate or tea AFTER A LONG WALK. The other reason why people like winter is lots of holidays.
After winter SPRING comes. It`s a pleasant time when the weather is getting warmer and warmer. Nature wakeS up after winter SLEEP. Trees GET COVERED with green leaves, young green grass BEGINS TO grow. In spring all the birds return to their homelands and streets, parks and forests are full of sweet singing.
What about summer? People always look forward to summer, because it`s perfect time to have much fun, it`s time for HOLIDAYS. When there is hot weather, it is a big pleasure to get out of the town and to walk in the woods or to lie on A beach near THE river, THE lake or THE sea. Sometimes the heat in summer is terrible and the air gets stuffy. Then thunderstorms usually bring relief. SUMMER rains are usually pleasant and warm. Rains BRING FRESHNESS and AFTER RAINS we can OFTEN see a beautiful bridge across the sky called “a rainbow”.
The season that comes after summer is autumn. Autumn seems boring TO MANY PEOPLE, but I can`t agree with them. The most remarkable feature of this season ARE leaves, THAT change THEIR color from green to yellow, brown, gold and red. It seems TO BE A fairy-tale when leaves fall down from trees and a wonderful colorful carpet COVERS the ground. IT USUALLY OFTEN RAINS In October and November, AND RAINS are cold and unpleasant. The days become shorter and colder. Nature, as well as people prepare_ for winter.
WELL, I can imagine what it WOULD be like, if there WAS THE only ___ season on our planet.
I SUPPOSE THERE would be a moderate climate with middle temperatureS, something LIKE autumn OR spring. The sun shines, but IT ISnot ___ hot, rains are warm and PLEASANT. I suppose, that the sky would be blue and clear all year ROUND and if it__ snowED sometimes, the snow WOULD melt away very quickly and green grAss, trees, flowers WOUDN’T suffer from it.
That is how I imagine the only season IN the world.

Imagine the world with only one season. What season could it be in your opinion?

We all know that our planet has four seasons: winter, summer, autumn and spring. And of course they all have something unique, something special. That makes them different from each other.
Winter is the coldest season of the year. If you look around, you`ll see the snow gently falling from the sky, beautiful trees covered with white shining CLOTH OF snowflakes. THERE IS nothing is better than to play winter games outdoors with friends and drink a cup of tasty hot chocolate or tea after a long walk. (Порядок слов изменен. ) TheRE IS ANOther reason why people like winter; THEY ENJOY lots of holidays.
After winter comes spring. It`s a pleasant time when the weather is getting warmer DAY BY DAY. THE nature begins to wake up after THE winter SLEEP. THE trees TURN GREEN with NEW leaves, THE young green grass STARTS growING. In spring the birds COME BACK TO THEIR HOMEPLACES and FILL THE streets, parks and forests WITH JOYFUL singing.
What about summer? People always look forward to summer, because it`s perfect time to have so much fun, it`s THE BEST time for rest. When there is hot weather, it is a GREAT pleasure to get out of town and TAKE A walk in the woods or lie on the beach near THE river, THE lake or THE sea. Sometimes the heat in summer is terrible and the air gets stuffy. Then thunderstorms usually bring SOME relief. Rains in summer are usually pleasant and warm. After THE rain the air becomes fresh and very often we can see a beautiful bridge across the sky which is called “a rainbow”.
The season that comes after the summer is autumn. To many people autumn seems boring, but I can`t agree with them. The most remarkable feature of this season is THE TREE leaves, which change color from green to yellow, brown, gold and red. It`s seems like A fairy-tale FILM when leaves fall down from THE trees and a wonderful colorful carpet appears on the ground. In October and November usually there IS a lot of rain, IT IS cold and unpleasant. The days become shorter and colder. THE Nature, as well as people prepares for THE winter.
NOW LET’S imagine what it Would be like, if there were only one season IN our planet.
I think it would be a moderate climate with MILD temperatureS, something IN between OF autumn and spring. The sun shines, but not so hot, rains are warm and enjoyable. I suppose that the sky would be blue and clear all year and if it WOULD snow sometimes, the snow WOULD melt DOWN very quickly and green grAss, trees, flowers Wouldn’t suffer from THE CHANGE OF THE SEASONS.
That is how I imagine IF THERE WERE only ONE season IN the world.

1.flowers do not suffer / or would not suffer, gross - grass, if it snowed...,the snow would melt. like a fairy tale?
after summer
It seems
near river, lake or sea(what about an article?)
Trees are covered with leaves
clothe- в словаре толковом это глагол (Хорнби)
все, что я увидела, но, наверняка, пропустила ошибки.
Мне очень понравился ваш текст.

лучше так:
1. with white shining clothes made of snowflakes (слово clothe - неверно здесь, остальное стилистика)
2. Nothing is better than playing winter games outdoors with friends and a cup of tasty hot chocolate or tea after a long walk.
3. Trees are covered with green leaves.
4. Лучшке After rains the air gets fresh
5. It seems а не it's seems like a fairy-tale (-a- пропущено)
6. and if it was snowing/snowed sometimes, the snow would melt away very quickly and green gross, trees, flowers wouldn't` suffer from it.
7. the only season IN the world.

оратору выше:
THERE IS nothing is better - это НЕВЕРНО!
if it WOULD snow sometimes, - ЭТО ТОЖЕ НЕВЕРНО. 100%
something IN between OF autumn and spring - чушь

все что заметила при беглом взгялде

Много ошибок как стилистических так и грамматических. проверяйте текст внимательно, либо обратитесь к преподавателю. а так молодец, классический текст моих пособий по английскому под редакцией русских преподов :) А что саое интересное-этот текст почувствовать можем мы россияне, а вот жители Гавай или Бразилии, понять, что такое смена сезонов.

бла бла ла)))

мне понравилось))... по-моему не нужно ничего исправлять!..