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Today the Russian folk style backs in the fashion! The image of a shy and delicate elegant lady has inspired world famous designers to create different romantic outfits. They have pastel light beige and olive tones. Cross-stitch attaches unique national originality of modern things. Other methods of decoration, such as printed pattern and hand-made lace, play a role too. Blouses with sleeve-flashlights, bright dresses with graceful patterns and long flying skirts from the finest linen are most popular in the world. When you in these outfits, you want to wearing a wreath of wild flowers and walking barefoot on the wet green grass. Wicker and colored shoes, belts, dresses, sundresses, lightweight dresses for hot summer, strapless dresses, straw bags - all these elements are a tribute to the Russian fashion. Various patterns and braid decorates different trendy outfits. Long Russian blouses for women came into fashion Instead Indian tunics. Embroidery on the clothes is undoubted attribute of Russian dresses. Patterns and colors adorn the skirts, dresses, shirts and make them special. For those who want to decorate yourselve’s casual outfit, but who do not want to change radically the style of clothing, the Russian-folk accessories fit. Shawls, interesting earrings, belts, bags are the best accessories from the Russian fashion. You can show that you are original!

Прошу указать на орфографические и пунктуационные ошибки. Заранее спасибо)
В английском гораздо меньше запятых, чем в русском.
Today the Russian folk style IS COMING backXX inTO XXXX fashion! The image of a shy(,) delicate AND elegant lady has inspired world'S famous designers to create VARIOUS romantic outfits IN XXXXX pastel(,) light beige and olive tones. Cross-stitch attaches unique national originality TO modern things. Other methods of decoration
such as printed pattern and hand-made lace play THEIR PART / ARE IMPORTANT, too. Blouses with sleeve-flashlights, bright dresses with graceful patterns and long flying skirts from the finest linen are most popular in the world. When you WEAR /ARE in/PUT ON these outfits you want to PUT ON a wreath of wild flowers and walkXXX barefoot on the wet green grass. Wicker and colored shoes, belts, dresses, sundresses, lightweight dresses for hot summer, strapless dresses, straw bags - all these elements are a tribute to the Russian fashion. Various patterns and braid decorateXX different trendy outfits. Long Russian blouses for women came into fashion instead OF Indian tunics. Embroidery on XXXX clothes is undoubted/INDISPENSABLE attribute of Russian dresses.
Patterns and colors adorn the skirts, dresses AND shirts and make them special. For those who want to decorate XXXXXXXX ONE'S/HIS OR HER casual outfit but XXXX do not want to change radically the style of clothing,
XXXX Russian folk accessories fit. Shawls, interesting earrings, belts AND bags are the best accessories from the Russian fashion. You can show that you are original!
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Есть проблемы с грамматикой. Да и сам текст крайне неудобоваримый. Уж очень тяжеловесный.
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yourselve’s = yourselves? опечатка ?