Проверьте, пожалуйста, мое сочинение по английскому. Заранее спасибо)

ошибки в каждом предложении
хотя бы начните с This summer holidays I was/were..
Im glad I've visited(to have visied).. I was happy(desperate) to visit
with a group
we were late
To Moscow, to airport, to Germany
had to wait
It took us a lot of time
To Moscow, to airport, to Germany
arrived to Moscow where our troubles have just started. Were were late
Were exhausted
In the end we landed in London (arrived to London); city; Most friendly and sociable guys live there. I made a friend with a foreigner (with some other guys, students from another countries); pen-friends (если множ)
We have visited a lot of interesting places in London. We have been to Church of st. ..What I liked most of all was a Tate modern..

It was a program.. In the mornings we were studying(had some studyings). In the afternoon, once our lessons would have ended... ecursions with school stuff.
On weekends we visted ...Its historical areas???-places where traditions are still alive(still live) или я не знаю как сказать
On the one hand I didnt want to go back and leave this wonderful place on the other hand I missed my frinds and family
Still those were the best holidays of my life!

Могут быть грамматически

даа неплохо но можно и по лучше во втором предложении!

Увидел
I was in London
и сразу пропало желание.
Was - это не "был" в превычном нам смысле. Это вспомогательный глагол.
Last summer I went to London.
А так впринципе для 6 класса сойдёт.
Надеюсь ты не старше ))

А сочинение где?