My last visit to a zoo
Our capital Kiev- is a beautiful and old city. Great history, museums, stadiums, parks and other make this city one of the most attractive places for tourists in Ukraine. I would like to tell you about my last visit to Kiev Zoo.
It was a sunny summer day. Me and my mother decided to go to the zoo. I was an eleven-year-old boy and it was an impressing experience for me. First, we saw a flock of swans, they all was white except one he was black and very proud of his unusual feature. The next was a cage with one lion. The ideal predator was very calm, he was just looking at people and occasionally yawning. The most unforgettable was meeting with one of the biggest animals on the Earth- an elephant. He was really enormous. I have never been able to imagine it is huge I real life. We have also seen sparrows and owls, monkeys, tigers, polar bears, crocodiles, frogs and rare insects. All these made a great influence on me and after that I loved the nature even more.
At the end of that day I was tired and happy. The whole night I saw dreams about fantastical animals and other unreal creatures. They all were telling me the same thing, it was something very important but unfortunately when I woke up I forgot it.
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Kiev Zoo.
It was a sunny summer day. My mother and I decided to go to the zoo. I was an eleven-year-old boy and it was an impressive experience for me. First, we saw a flock of swans, they all were white except one, it was black and very proud of his unusual feathers. The next thing was a cage with one lion. The ideal predator was very calm, it was just looking at people and occasionally yawning. The most unforgettable moment was meeting with one of the biggest animals on the Earth, an elephant. It was really enormous. I would never have thought how huge it could be in real life. Besides, we saw sparrows and owls, monkeys, tigers, polar bears, crocodiles, frogs and rare insects. All these made a great influence on me and after that visit I loved the nature even more.
At the end of that day I was tired and happy. The whole night I saw dreams about fantastic animals and other unreal creatures. They all were telling me the same thing, it was something very important but unfortunately when I woke up I forgot it.
It was a sunny summer day. My mother and I decided to go to the zoo. I was an eleven-year-old boy and it was an impressive experience for me. First, we saw a flock of swans, they all were white except one, it was black and very proud of his unusual feathers. The next thing was a cage with one lion. The ideal predator was very calm, it was just looking at people and occasionally yawning. The most unforgettable moment was meeting with one of the biggest animals on the Earth, an elephant. It was really enormous. I would never have thought how huge it could be in real life. Besides, we saw sparrows and owls, monkeys, tigers, polar bears, crocodiles, frogs and rare insects. All these made a great influence on me and after that visit I loved the nature even more.
At the end of that day I was tired and happy. The whole night I saw dreams about fantastic animals and other unreal creatures. They all were telling me the same thing, it was something very important but unfortunately when I woke up I forgot it.
Екатерина Верещагина
спасибо большое, как там отметить "лучший ответ", или это модераторы делают?
Нет времени, но:
...they all WERE white except FOR one...
...they all WERE white except FOR one...
о животных говорят не he или she, а it / I have never been able to imagine HOW IT IS HUGE IN real life....
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