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I would like to tell you about a Barbadian singer Rihanna.
Robyn Rihanna Fenty was born in 1988 in Saint Michael, Barbados.
In 2004, she moved to the United States of America.
Rihanna began singing when she was 7.
She threw High School because she was busy with a music career.The song “Pon De Replay” is her first hit.
When Jay-Z heard this song he couldn’t believe that it was Rihanna’s song because it was great and very difficult for young artist.
Her debut single became a worldwide hit.
In August 2005, Rihanna’s debut album “Music Of The Sun” was released in the USA.
A lot of her songs were among the top 10 songs in the different countries.
For example, “Unfaithful”, “Break It Off”, “SOS”.
She has changed her style from a nice girl to a rebel.
Rihanna won award “Favourite Pop/Rock Female Artist” in 2008 and more other awards.
It is interesting to know that Rihanna is also actress.
She has taken part in the “Battleship”.
Rihanna is a very popular artist and I really like her songs.