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Допустила я ошибки? Разговорный английский, письмо =)

Снова. Я пока в процессе изучения английского, поэтому беспокоюсь =)
Но я думаю, что делаю успехи :3

Thank you for the link =). It's my dream too. I very want to share my joy. Few days ago I bought THREE new dolls, my lovely little models. I'm very happy and I want to say it everybody, especially to you, my friend.
My dream is slowly becoming a reality and I hope your dream will becoming reality too.

Your Vicky.
Dinara Zhubatyr
Dinara Zhubatyr
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I want to share my joy very much
I want to tell it to everybody
My dream is coming true and I hope yours will come true too.
Динар Хакимов
Динар Хакимов
16 660
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Thank you for the link =). It's my dream, too. I really want to share my joy with you. A few days ago I bought THREE new dolls - my lovely little models. I'm very happy and I want to say it to everyone, especially to you, my friend.
My dream is gradually becoming a reality and I hope your dream will become a reality, too.

Your Vicky.leak
Федор Золотовский
Федор Золотовский
51 502
thx u 4 da link =). Dat'z mah drim 2. I do want 2 share mah joy wiz u. A few daiz ago oi bot 3 new dollz -- mah loavli modelz. im happy an' I wanna tel' it 2 everywun, especially 2 u, mah frent.
Mah dreem'z gradually becomn ril an' oi houp ur driem gonna becum ril 2. ( = oi houp so will yours)

ur vicky.
Анжела Крилавичюте
Анжела Крилавичюте
63 374
Thank you for the link =). It's my dream too. I'd like to share my joy with you. A few days ago I bought THREE new dolls, my lovely little models. I'm very happy and I want to say it to everybody, especially to you, my friend.
My dream is slowly becoming reality and I hope your dream will become reality too.

Your Vicky.
Ал
Алёна
33 365
с гугла переводишь что ли? )
I very want = I want very much
becoming a reality (лолшто? ) = becoming real

учи грамматику, читай книжки))
*** Геймерша ***
*** Геймерша ***
3 449
в последнем предложении глагол becoming надо перевести в форму ифинитива become а так все правильно!
Moldir Тurmahanova
Moldir Тurmahanova
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