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Hi, Alex. I liked your advice on how to overcome a stress caused by the school. When I'm under a stress, I too try to find some time to relax. For me, to relax is to deal with friends and parents. I think it's difficult to combine studies with entertainment.

Hi Alex. Thanks for your advice on how to deal with school related stress. As for myself, when I feel stressed, I'm always trying to find time to relax. I get my relaxation through communicating with parents and friends. I consider combining studying and entertainment to be quite difficult.

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Hi Alex,
Thanks for your advice on handling stress. Of course, it's a bit of a pain to do a lot of homework. Anyway, I always try to find time to have a rest. Socializing with friends and parents helps me to relax. It's definetely hard to combine studying and leisure.

Hi, Alex. I liked your advice on how to cope with the stress I have in school. As for me, I always try to find some time to relax, to talk to my friends and parents. But the same time I think it's difficult to combine study and entertainment.

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