Hello, my kind friend! (Sure, you are kind, because I hope that you will like my letter.)
Such an unusual letter I write not in my native language for the first time. My name is Nadya and, perhaps, you’ve already guessed that I’m from Russia. I live in a small but the most beautiful town Dergachi. I’m 13 and I study in the 7th grade. I like to read very much. I am active at learning of English, because I like this subject infinitely. I’ m keen on tennis. I like intellectual plays and humorous competitions. My friends say I am kind and funny. What can I tell you any more?...I don’t know. May be I’ll leave some secrets about myself for you to know me better from the next letter (I hope, that it will be so)?Generally, I love many things in my life.
So, as I have already told, my friend, I like to read very much. Now I read trilogy by William Nicholson.It's fantastic! I like to watch horror movies and anime. My favorite - Naruto, Mirrors, Sillent Hill, Beck. I like to read Russian classics very much: Pushkin, Gogol and Block. They are known for the whole world by their great literature work.
Unfortunately I still don't speak English very well, but I learn it every day and hope I could speak better soon.Don't laugh, if I made a mistakes.
I am eager to find out more about you, to ask you about everything interesting for you.
Well, till our meeting, my kind friend!
Лингвистика
Прошу проверить мое письмо, хочу отправить англичанке)
Good job, Tararam! :) A few corrections/suggestions:
Hello, my kind friend! (Sure, you are kind, because I hope that you will like my letter.)
This is the first time that I am writing such an unusual letter not in my native language. My name is Nadya and, perhaps, you’ve already guessed that I’m from Russia. I live in a small but the most beautiful town Dergachi. I’m 13 and I am in 7th grade. I love to read. I am actively studying English, because I really like this subject. I’m keen on tennis. I like intellectual games and humorous competitions. My friends say that I am kind and funny. What more can I tell you?.. I don’t know. Maybe I’ll keep some secrets about myself so you'll get to know me better in the next letter (I hope it will be so?). Generally, I love many things in my life.
So, as I have already told you, I really enjoy reading. Now I am reading a trilogy by William Nicholson. It's fantastic! I like to watch horror movies and anime. My favorites are Naruto, Mirrors, Sillent Hill, Beck. I like to read Russian classics very much: Pushkin, Gogol and Block. They are known by the whole world for their great literary work.
Unfortunately I still don't speak English very well, but I learn every day and I hope that I will speak better soon. Don't laugh if I made any mistakes.
I am eager to find out more about you, to ask you about everything that you find interesting.
Well, so long my kind friend!
Hello, my kind friend! (Sure, you are kind, because I hope that you will like my letter.)
This is the first time that I am writing such an unusual letter not in my native language. My name is Nadya and, perhaps, you’ve already guessed that I’m from Russia. I live in a small but the most beautiful town Dergachi. I’m 13 and I am in 7th grade. I love to read. I am actively studying English, because I really like this subject. I’m keen on tennis. I like intellectual games and humorous competitions. My friends say that I am kind and funny. What more can I tell you?.. I don’t know. Maybe I’ll keep some secrets about myself so you'll get to know me better in the next letter (I hope it will be so?). Generally, I love many things in my life.
So, as I have already told you, I really enjoy reading. Now I am reading a trilogy by William Nicholson. It's fantastic! I like to watch horror movies and anime. My favorites are Naruto, Mirrors, Sillent Hill, Beck. I like to read Russian classics very much: Pushkin, Gogol and Block. They are known by the whole world for their great literary work.
Unfortunately I still don't speak English very well, but I learn every day and I hope that I will speak better soon. Don't laugh if I made any mistakes.
I am eager to find out more about you, to ask you about everything that you find interesting.
Well, so long my kind friend!
I am active at learning of English
Don't laugh, if I made some mistakes.
Don't laugh, if I made some mistakes.
Learning English (без оф)
Лучше слово plays заменить на games
Any more имеет немного другой смысл (чаще в отрицательных предложениях) , здесь лучше поставить что-нибудь типа else
FROM the next letter? По-моему, по смыслу больше подходит in
I like watching (т. к. говорится о личных предпочтениях)
Не I could, а I will вe aвle (could - это прошедшее время)
Ну и если пишешь именно англичанке, а не американке, то лучше замени movies на films, grade на form ;)
Лучше слово plays заменить на games
Any more имеет немного другой смысл (чаще в отрицательных предложениях) , здесь лучше поставить что-нибудь типа else
FROM the next letter? По-моему, по смыслу больше подходит in
I like watching (т. к. говорится о личных предпочтениях)
Не I could, а I will вe aвle (could - это прошедшее время)
Ну и если пишешь именно англичанке, а не американке, то лучше замени movies на films, grade на form ;)
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