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How I spent my Summer Holidays
All the schoolkids look forward for Summer Holidays. For the great majoriti of pupils, It´s a big pleasure to waste the time with friends or go abroad to see different countries and meet new people. Doubtless, they are right, but I spent my vacation in another way.
First of all, I must to say that I´ve been reading books the whole days because it´s a very exciting activity for me. Besids, reading is more useful than idle chatter and sitting at the computer. Furthermore, one shouldn´t forget that urban ecology is contaminated, which is not acceptable for health. Therefore, I spent 10 days in the north of Baikal, which is one of the largest and deepest lakes in the world. I had a good rest and gained strength for the entire academic year.
To draw the conclusion, one can say that I spent my Summer Holidays with benefit and enjoyment. During my Holidays I read a lot of interesting books, learned much new and improved my health. Now, I fell ready to get back to scholl.
I´m glad to see my schoolmate and techers.