Можете проверить сочинение пожалуйста?

молодец, красиво написано. Ошибок нет.

Могу. То есть уже проверил. Ошибки и огрехи есть.

I think that everyone has A right to do any sport he or she likes but only if it doesn't do any harm to other people. First of all i think that any extreme sport is dangerous to life. Basically, THESE KINDS OF SPORT engage young people. They risk their lives for the sake of adventure, adrenaline and new sensations. I think IT is (НЕТ АРТИКЛЯ) very stupid and dangerous. But IT IS their right. Each person may be engaged in what he wants including extreme sports. Another thing is when they ENDANGER (PR SIMPLE) the lives of others. I think it's wrong and this is a crime. After all, human life is priceless and people should protect it (Я БЫ СКАЗАЛА VALUE). Because each person has a right to be safe. The end.

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I think that everyone has got a right to do any sport they like, but only if it doesn't do any harm to other people. First of all, i think that extreme sports may be dangerous for everyone. Basically, these sports engage young people. They risk their lives because they want to seek for adventures, adrenaline and new sensations. I think this is really stupid and dangerous. But of course, they have the right to do whatever they want to. Every person may be engaged in what they want to do, even extreme sports. Another problem is that they may be endangering the lives of others. I think it's wrong and it is a crime. After all, any human life is priceless and people should protect it. Because every person has a right to be safe. The end.

Nicely written! Few mistakes but its not a big deal at all ;) That's how I would interpret your composition, well you may or may not agree. Good luck!!