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volleyball player is a favorite Zhitova Olga -x- and my favorite volleyball player is a Zhitova Olga.
Olga Zhitova played in the team Dinamo - если она ИГРАЛА то правельно а если т ыхочешь сказать играет то будет PLAYS
Olga became world champion and silver medalist Grand Prix - я думаю лучше сказать не стала а просто есть - is - потому что если ты пишешь что она стала то надо писать в каком году. лучше просто посмтри в каком году и будет красивее нежели - is
Every night I'm with friends going to the park and play volleyball - бред ты написал каждую ночь я есть с друзьями собираюсь в парк и играю в волейбол - every nighy I go to the park with my friends to play football - если ты школьник то лучше напиши - evening, а не night,
When I play I forget about all the problems -x- When i play football i Forget about all my problems.
The mood after the game was excellent, everything bad is in the sword - Чё?)))
Sport helps us to live and enjoy each new day - лучше напиши - All people can find their favourit mefn of sport and it's can helps them to enjoy future day)
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Sports role in our lives.
Sports play the important role in our lives. Sports help us to be healthy and happy. In the world there are many kinds of sports football, basketball, tennis and others. My favourite sports - volleyball, the player of volleyball - favourite Zhitova Olga. Olga Zhitova played to a command "Dinamo". Olga became the world champion and silver Gran at the medallist. Every night I with friends, go to play volleyball in park. When I play, I forget about all problems. The mood after game at me excellent, all bad remains in a sword. Sports help us to live and enjoy in each new afternoon.