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New Year is our favorite winter holiday . New Year is celebrated from the night of the 31st of December to the 1st of January. The main symbol of New Year is a Christmas tree (=A christmas tree is believed to be the main symbol of New Year) . Father Christmas and Snow Maiden are also believed to be a symbol of New Year who come to children and give them presents. Meeting New Year, relatives sit down to one table. In a lot of countries head of a state talks to his peoples before 5 minutes to New Year.
Senan Eyvazov
Senan Eyvazov
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New Year is our favourite winter holiday. New Year is celebrated on the night before the 1st of January. The main symbol of New Year is the Christmas tree (= the christmas tree is the main symbol of New Year). Father Christmas and Snow Maiden who are also believed to be symbolS of New Year come to children and give them presents. Meeting New Year relatives (families) sit down to (one) table (for a holiday meal). In a lot of countries head of state addresses the people 5 minutes before midnight (ну, просто для разнообразия) .

Я не вижу большой беды с артиклями.
New Year может употребляться как с артиклем, так и без. Дед Мороз и Снегурочка как имена собственные артикля не требуют, так же, как и head of state.
Алексей Кононов
Алексей Кононов
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Можно начать хотя бы с того, что празник называется New Year's Eve )))
Дед Мороза лучше так и обозвать Grandfather Frost или Jack Frost.
Ну, а с артиклями тут просто беда...
Azick Mukhitdinoff
Azick Mukhitdinoff
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New Year is our favoUrite winter holiday . New Year is celebrated from the night of 31st of December TILL 1st of January. The main symbol of New Year is THE Christmas tree (=THE christmas tree is believed to be the main symbol of New Year) . Father Christmas and THE Snow Maiden are also believed to be THE symbol of New Year who come to children and give them presents. Meeting New Year, relatives sit down AT one table. In MANY countries THE head of THE state talks to his people (БЕЗ 'S') 5 minutes BEFORE New Year.
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Жека Жекан
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Во втором предложении New year selebrates, как мне кажется, т к это передача факта