Please can you review my essay about the tree. Thanks all

1. Large tree grows just near your house, producing troubles for you. Write a letter to local authority explaining this problem, discuss the ways of its resolution and make enquiries about financial aspect

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the large tree that grows on the right hand of the driveway leading to my house. Unfortunately, this tree causes many inconveniences to me and my family. The crown of it prevents sunlight from reaching windows of the children's room. As the tree was planted in violations of the Council Legislation as the distance between the trunk and the wall of the house is too short, therefore it knocks on the window in strong wind. During the last gale two windows were smashed by the branches of the tree, which cost me roughly 100 dollars. I feel that it is my right to be able to sleep without fear of a branch breaking my window at night, or becoming injured due to broken branches or glass.

Given the above circumstances, I believe that nothing can be done to improve the situation therefore there is no other alternative except simply cutting the tree down or at least trimming the majority of the branches. As for expenses, I am happy to negotiate the expense for the work and removal of excess debris. I suppose it would be reasonable for both of us.
Please contact me on 12345678, or at xyz@mail.com to arrange the date and the time when a crew of your workers is able to come to my house to deal with this existing problem

I look forward to receiving your positive reply.
Yours sincerely,