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24. Children should never be educated at home by their parents. Do you agree or disagree? at least 250 words

Education is a an integral part of any society. Society and individuals cannot be separated. That's why I firmly believe that children should be educated at schools.
Let's consider advantages of going to school. First of all, children who attend school learn not only how to read, to write and to count but also how communicate with people who surround them. Secondly, a lot of leading psychologists claim that to study at school more productive. It is explained by competitiveness among children and seeking for praise from the side of teachers. Thirdly, school teachers graduated from universities and are taught methods of teaching and aspects of children psychology. Fourthly, the necessity of going to school makes children more responsible and they become more adaptable to the environments. Lastly, going to school is very challenging and exciting.
I am not able to subscribe to the belief that home education is better than school education because it can make harm to children's ego. According to the statistic children who were taught at home by parents more withdrawn and aloof. If they meet any obstacles they often are not able to overcome them on their own in everyday life. In addition, they are more prone to depressions and what is important they are inclined to be single in other words they do not get married.
Certainly, there are cases when children should have their lessons at home. For example, when they are seriously ill and it is not advisable for them to leave home.
To summarize, school is a significant stage in an individual's life. In my view, schools are very enjoyable and useful experience and we do not have the right to get rid our children of it.