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39. The best way to reduce the number of traffic accidents is to make all young drivers complete a safe driving education course before being licensed to drive. Do you agree or disagree&
I completely agree that courses on driving will reduce the number of accidents on the road considerably. Unfortunately, a lot of drivers who get driving licenses do not know essential rules which are vital to conduct while driving. Remember to cite your sources!

Every year accidents on the road resulting from ignoring safety rules cause a lot of casualties. According to statistics from Worldwide Public Radio, many young people are involved in these accidents. For example, for the last ten years in Russia about 60 per cent of accidents were because of uneducated drivers who were aged of 18-25. Three years ago a new campaign was launched in order to reduce fatal vehicle accidents. All drivers had to take a course online followed by an exam. It should be pointed out that not only young drivers were to do it but even experienced ones. Thanks to this campaign the number of accidents reduced tenfold among young drivers.
In many European countries many experts have been asking authorities to treat safe driving courses seriously. Nowadays all young people in Europe, in order to have the right to drive, must attend these courses and exams.
I strongly believe that these courses must be compulsory. All drivers regardless of age should be taught driving by professionals. Furthermore, after completing this course all its students need to take an exam. Thirdly, only those who will manage to pass this yearly exam successfully should have the right to get a driving license.