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Soon people who cannot work with computers will be disadvantaged. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea?
Computers play a crucial role in people's lives today. Computers ease our lives in many ways. For example, in bookkeeping almost all calculations are made with computers, for learning there are a range of interesting and educational programs which may help people learn without the aid of a teacher, for language studies there are a lot of dictionaries where one can easily find the meaning of many words and so on.
Almost all organization are using computers in their work as using them is much more productive plus it decreases expenditure of conduct of business . If one looks up employment advertisements one can see that all employers want their employees to have computer skills.
So one of the requirements to land a job is being a confident and able user of a computer. Even students who study in the secondary schools have compulsory computer lessons.
So younger generations from school days are being prepared to be able to use computers.
I entirely agree that people who are bad at using computers will have less opportunity to find a stimulating,glamorous and rewarding job in the next ten years and even now such a situation exists in the labor market. For example, a friend of mine was redundant and she had never worked on computers. When she applied for the employment fund she was strongly advised to attend computer courses.
Sum in , I firmly believe that in several years even cleaners will have to have knowledge og computers to work in any field. There is a tendency that computers are intervening in all spheres and has become an attribute of our lives. That's why having basic computers skill is a must.