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Work and relaxation are two necessary things for our life. But the matter
is that the majority of people have a concentration only on one of these kinds
of activity.

Thus, time is the most ruthless and inflexible element of our existence, therefore,
need to learn how to manage my time. The most important difference between time
and money is that is distributed between all the people and rightly so. For a
worker and a foreman, a student and a housewife, businessman and the beggar a
day has 24 hours and not a second more. Thus the problem is not how much time
we have, but how we use it. Jean de La
bruyère wrote: «People's regret about their mindlessly wasted time does not
always help them to spend the rest of it reasonably».

Today’s rhythm of life is fast. People try to do everything. After a hard
working day, they try to relax and enjoy. When a desire becomes reality, they
come back to their usual way of life. But that time that they spend during
entertainment they could spend it within a family, with close surroundings,
help married couple or children. In the case when personal entertainment
becomes the most important thing, we can forget about our duties and about that
what is really significant for us.

People who are not able to manage your time, can watch and months to think
about his past, sorry about the lost opportunities. If you look objectively, it
is quite senseless, because impossible to change the past. All you can do is to
influence their own future. While we are alive, we are able to act creatively
and to reach for new heights.

If a man wants to relax without
detriment, he or she should combine it with job and daily activity. Only in this case entertainment will
not damage.