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Globalization - process of the world economic, political and cultural integration and unification. The basic consequence of it is the world division of labour, migration in scales of all planet of the capital, human and industrial resources, standardization of the legislation, economic and technological processes, and also rapproachement of cultures of the different countries. It is objective, natural-historical process which has system character, that is covers all spheres of a life of a society.
For economic aspects of globalization free trade, free movement of the capital, decrease in profit taxes of the enterprises, simplicity of moving of industries between the various states in interests of reduction of costs on work and natural resources are characteristic, and also:
1. The developed and developing countries steadily approach on a level of salaries, the prices for the goods and profitableness of the enterprises;
2. The number and the size of merges of the companies inside of the countries and at a transnational level which are accompanied by radical re-structuring and reduction of quantity of the borrowed labour grows;
3. The tendency to outsourcing not profile activity of the companies to the specialized companies. Special value has outsourcing from the developed countries in developing which leads to reduction of employment in the developed countries and to growth of employment and incomes in developing countries;
4. Fast distribution of the financial information worldwide owing to the Internet, the tendency to a greater openness of the enterprises;
5. Great value of stock exchanges and those « financial tools » in which they trade - actions of the enterprises and share funds, commodity futures
6. Influence of few national currencies through the international system of a free currency exchange for economic processes in the most different countries;
7. Increase in consumer credits as platforms for the further growth of consumption. On the other hand impossibility of maintenance of an average standard of life without attraction of credits;
8. Powerful stream of advertising in all mass media, washing out of precise distinctions between the information and advertising;
9. Growing stratification under incomes both in developed, and in developing countries which unequal access of the population to formation strongly influences;
10. Deleting of a national identity of production;
11. Strengthening of a role of the transnational companies.
Globalization - process of the world economic, political and cultural integration and unification. The basic consequences of it are:
the world division of labour,
human and industrial resources migration in scales of entire planet of the capital,
standardization of the legislation,
economical and technological processes,
and also rapproachement of cultures of the different countries.
It is objective, natural-historical process which has a systematic nature, which is covering all aspects of a life of a society.
For economic aspects of globalization there are free trade, free movement of the capital, decrease in profit taxes for the enterprises, simplification of moving industries between the various states forthe sake of cost reduction ( and natural resources are characteristic это вообще не правильно. не уверен что вы хотите этим сказать ), and also:
1. The developed and developing countries steadily levelling in terms of salaries, the prices for the goods and profitableness of the enterprises;
2. The number and the size of merges of the companies inside of the countries and at a transnational level which are accompanied by growth of radical re-structuring and reduction of quantity of the borrowed labour;
3. The tendency to outsource not profile activity of the companies to the specialized companies. Special value has outsourcing from the developed countries into developing which leads to reduction of employment in the developed countries and to growth of employment and incomes in developing countries;
4. Fast distribution of the financial information worldwide owing to the Internet, the tendency to a greater openness of the enterprises;
5. Great value of stock exchanges and those « financial tools » in which they operate - actions of the enterprises and share funds, commodity futures не уверен что хотите этм сказать )
6. Influence of few national currencies through the international system of a free currency exchange on economic processes in the most different countries;
7. Increase in consumer credits as platforms for the further growth of consumption. On the other hand impossibility of maintening average standard of life without using of credit facilities;
8. Powerful stream of advertising in all mass media, washing out precise distinctions between the information and advertising;
9. Growing stratification of incomes both in developed, and in developing countries which ( unequal access of the population to formation strongly influences; опять абракадабра )
10. Erasing of a national identity of products;
11. Strengthening role of the transnational companies.

На тройку теперьп отянет. Там еще много стилистических и грамматических ошибок, но меня ждет пятничное пиво ))
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rapproachement это слово с ошибкой