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Кто знает английский помогите, плиз!!!
В школе задали написать сочинение. Я написала, но переживаю из-за грамматических ошибок. Проверте, пожалуйста, исправте ошибки, перефразируйте предложения, вообщем проверте. Our life is full of adventures, exciting events and pleasant moments. But I am sure, everybody keeps in the memory some case, some development that was the best in the life. Now I want to tell to you about a day that I still remembered. It was my birthday. My parents and friends sent to me greeting and gave presents. But there was another surprise that I did not know then yet about. In the evening when sky was studded with stars my father asked me to close eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of building where a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me was. In evening lights the city seemed fairy and magestic. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I am part of a city. This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world is wonderful and mighty. Value every minute, every instant of our life on it planet.
Our life is full of adventures, exciting events and pleasant moments. But I am sure, everybody keeps in the memory some moments that were the best in your life. Now I want to tell you about the day that I still remember.
It was my birthday. My parents and friends were greeting and i received many presents. But there was another surprise. I did not know about it before. In the evening when sky was studded with stars my father asked me to close my eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of building whith a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me. In the evening lights the city seemed really magestic. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I ama part of the city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world was wonderful and mighty. Appreciate every minute, every moment of our life!
It was my birthday. My parents and friends were greeting and i received many presents. But there was another surprise. I did not know about it before. In the evening when sky was studded with stars my father asked me to close my eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of building whith a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me. In the evening lights the city seemed really magestic. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I ama part of the city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world was wonderful and mighty. Appreciate every minute, every moment of our life!
Александра Васильева
were greeting ME
Our life is full of adventures, exciting events and pleasant moments. But I am sure (THAT) everybody keeps in -- memory some case, some development that was the best in the life. Now I want to tell -- you about THE day that I still REMEMBER.
It was my birthday. My parents and friends sent ME greetingS and gave presents. But there was another surprise that I did not know then yet about. In the evening when THE sky was studded with THE stars, my father asked me to close MY eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of A building where a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me was. In THE evening lights the city seemed fairy and maJestic. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I WAS A part of THE city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world WAS\IS wonderful and mighty.
Value every minute, every instant of our LIVES on THE planet.
PS Исправлены только грамматические ошибки: ни лексика, ни стилистика не тронуты!
It was my birthday. My parents and friends sent ME greetingS and gave presents. But there was another surprise that I did not know then yet about. In the evening when THE sky was studded with THE stars, my father asked me to close MY eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of A building where a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me was. In THE evening lights the city seemed fairy and maJestic. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I WAS A part of THE city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world WAS\IS wonderful and mighty.
Value every minute, every instant of our LIVES on THE planet.
PS Исправлены только грамматические ошибки: ни лексика, ни стилистика не тронуты!
Our life is full of adventures, exciting events and pleasant moments. But I am sure, everybody keeps in the memory some case, some development that was the best in the life. Now I want to tell you about the day that I still ++remember++.
It was my birthday. My parents and friends sent to me greeting and gave presents. But there was another surprise that I did not know then yet about ++it++. In the evening when sky was studded with stars my father asked me to close eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of building where a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me was. In evening lights the city seemed fairy and? magestic?. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I am part of a city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world is wonderful and mighty. Value every minute, every instant of our life on it planet.
++то, что я исправил++, это я не понял??
It was my birthday. My parents and friends sent to me greeting and gave presents. But there was another surprise that I did not know then yet about ++it++. In the evening when sky was studded with stars my father asked me to close eyes, and then led me somewhere. When I opened my eyes I found myself on the roof of building where a wonderful evening view on Kiev in front of me was. In evening lights the city seemed fairy and? magestic?. I felt that I lived in the clouds and I am part of a city.
This day was the best day in my life, because I understood that the world is wonderful and mighty. Value every minute, every instant of our life on it planet.
++то, что я исправил++, это я не понял??
Guli Adilbek
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Да вроде всё хорошо ;)
جنية سكران
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