Андрей
Андрей

проверьте на ошибки )англ яз

The technologies develop constantly. Because of that we meet with new useful invitations every year. Recently nobody knew the meaning of computer, but today almost of people have it. Every person has an opinion about developing a science. Some people consider that it makes our life more comfortable and interesting. Others believe that it has a bad influence, because these new devises can destroy a humanity .There are several advantages of this progress.Firstly,due to the new technologies we have a lot of abilities. For example, our houses full of a good, quality technique . That's why we have the convenient accommodations. Also, using the computer brings to us a lot of a helpful information .On the other hand the modern life has a plenty of harmful things .And the most important problem is that all this innovations affect on our health. We get the radiation from the computers, telephones, television and also destroys the nervous system of a body. We become lazier. We prefer to stay home rather than going out to have interaction with people. In conclusion, I want to add that we should use that devises not so frequently . And of course we mustn't live in virtual reality, because a real life is more attractive. Another chance to live twice we wouldn’t have.

DA
Diana Adamiya

Последняя фраза очень понравилась!

Иван Лысых
Иван Лысых

Пронумеруйте предложения, чтобы легче было исправлять.

Евгений
Евгений

очень по русски написано. даже исправлять скучно

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