кто анг знает проверьте мое сочинение ((

Question

The first course and the first term are most unforgetable and the most important time for every student. I enjoy to study in this university and in this chair, because learning foreign languages were always my cherished dream and I am happy it was presented to me such opportunity.

During the term I learned a lots. I learned a lot of words in english, a lot of rules, I read many books in english. It was difficult to catch every subjects but I tried to do everything in time. I could learned more better than in real, but I will try to learn more better in the second term .

I had ups and downs, but I wont give up in no case and will try on untill the end.

Евгения Васильева · Accepted Answer

я бы сказала: 
- for any student,/
- enjoy studying at this university and at this chair (если учитесь, то не chair, а department), /
- have always been my cherished dream (но тут не уверена) , 
вместо it was presented me such opportunity - I got this opportunity,/ 
- during this term I've learned a lot/,/
 - I've learned a lot of...,/
- to pay attention to all subjects (мне кажется, точно не catch),
could learned и more better зачёркиваем сразу (ибо после could - инфинитив) could study и просто better (без more в обоих случаях и вообще всегда) . will try to study/
- I won't give up anyway (или in any case - чтобы не было двойного отрицания) /
- В конце вместо untill - till
Удачи))

Сергей Андриенко · Answer

The first course and the first term ISTHE most unforgetable and important time for every student. I enjoy studying AT this university and AT this DEPARTMENT, because learning foreign languages HAS always BEEN my cherished dream and I am happy I'VE GOT THIS opportunity.

During the term I'VE learned a lot. I'VE learned a lot of ENGLISH words, a lot of rules, I'VE read A LOT OF books in English. It was difficult to PAY ATTENTION TO every subject but I tried to do everything in time. I could HAVE learned MUCH better than I DID, but I'll try to STUDY better in the second term .

I had ups and downs, but I won't give up in ANY case and I'll try TO DO MY BEST.