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Dear Sarah, 
Im writing in reply to the letter from Donna in Yorkshire. 
She shouldnt take offence.Maybe one of these boys fallen in love with you and tries to attract your attention. if i were you i would turn their comments into a joke.if someone called me names i would 
let pass.She should be confident or ignore all jokes. 
Вот, поправьте меня..

Виктория Квартиры · Accepted Answer

ты тоже школьник я тоже 
по этому поправить не могу):)

Елена Зорина · Answer

правильно

Юлия Андреевна · Answer

Maybe one of those boys has fallen in love with you and he tries to attract your attention. 
If someone called me names, I wouldn't pay any attention.