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Dear Ms.McCarthy, 5 February 2013

I am writing to ask about the tours offered. 
I would like to travel around the UK. I am interesting in prices and places. It will be good, if price would be a less than 100 euro. I will be travel with my friends and we want to know how much this tourist tour costs. We would like to go to Buckingham Palace, The Tower of London, The Globe Museum, London Eye, The Houses of Parliament, The British Museum and The Tate Gallery. I don’t want trip with many people, for example little tourist group from 20 people will be excellent. Also, I want to know what we can do after the excursions. Maybe it will be shopping and restaurants? 
I am looking forward to getting from you answer. 
Yours sincerely, 
Mari Mets

Юлия Жарова · Accepted Answer

I am writing to ask about the tour you offered 
I would like to travel through the UK.I am interested in prices and places.It will be well.I will travel with my friends.I do not want to be ona trip with a lot of people.A little tourist gruop consisting of 20 people would be excellent.I also want to know what we can do after the excursions.Maybe we can go shopping or maybe we will get th echance to go to a restaurant. 
 
I am looking forward to your answer

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Кирилл Пикулин · Answer

I would like to travel THOUGH the UK. I am interestED in prices and places TO VISIT. It will be good, if THE price would be XX less than 100 euro. I AM GOING TO travel with my friends and we WOULD LIKE to know how much SUCH A XXXX tour costs. We would like to VISIT/SEE Buckingham Palace, The Tower of London, The Globe Museum, London Eye, The Houses of ParLament, The British Museum and The Tate Gallery. I don’t want TO TRIP WITH A LOT OF people. a LITTLE TOURIST GROUP CONSISTING OF ABOUT 20 PEOPLE WOULD BE EXCELLENT. Also, I want to know what we can do after the excursions. Maybe WE CAN GO shopping OR HAVE SUUPER AT A restaurantX? 
I am looking forward to youR answer / TO HEARING FROM YOU SOON.