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The Internet is used by almost all people in the world
and of course has their positive and negative aspects. Among positive aspects
on my mind there are facts such as an ease of finding information and various ways
of communication. Also Internet can entertain and amuse educate. But on the
other hand it cans make people depending and inattentive. People are more
successful in their work or a job using the Internet, but I think that person
can be successful even if they don’t have access to the Internet. Because they
can use the literature and get kith’s experience. My uncle served me as an
example. He didn’t have access to the Internet, but he was attentive and communicable
in studying and at working probation so soon he became a successful worker.