ЮК
Юрий Касмынин

Не могли бы вы проверить текст по английскому?

The Internet is used by almost all people in the world
and of course has their positive and negative aspects. Among positive aspects
on my mind there are facts such as an ease of finding information and various ways
of communication. Also Internet can entertain and amuse educate. But on the
other hand it cans make people depending and inattentive. People are more
successful in their work or a job using the Internet, but I think that person
can be successful even if they don’t have access to the Internet. Because they
can use the literature and get kith’s experience. My uncle served me as an
example. He didn’t have access to the Internet, but he was attentive and communicable
in studying and at working probation so soon he became a successful worker.

Настена Сенина
Настена Сенина

The Internet is used by almost (VIRTUALLY) all people in the world
and of course IT has (ITS) positive and negative aspects. Among positive aspects
on my mind there IS ease of finding information and various ways
of communication. THE Internet can ALSO entertain and educate. On the
other hand, it can make people dependent(addictive?) and inattentive. People are more successful in (at) their work using the Internet, but I think that A person (PEOPLE)
can be successful even if they don’t have access to the Internet, because they
can use literature and get kith’s(?) experience. My uncle IS an
example. He didn’t have access to (DIDN'T USE) the Internet, but he was attentive and communicable in studying (as a student) and at work, so HE soon became a successful worker.

Если пройтись только по верхам и не переписывать все заново.

Вл
Владимир

it can make!!!!

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