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1)Hello. My family lives in Elban - the settlement of urban type in the Amur rayon of the Khabarovsk region of Russia.

2)In Elbani flows the river Ulbinka which is famous for ice water at all times of the year. Also a favorite place for fishermen

3)My grandfather's name is Peter. He is 55 years old. He is now retired.Before that, he worked as a machinist rig.

4)My grandmother's name is Nadezhda. She is 57 years old. She loves gardening and cooking.

5)My mother name is Svetlana. She is 36 years old. She is private entrepreneur . Mom is not afraid to take risks: parachute jumping, winter bathed in ice hole.she also knows how to drive a car

6)My stepfather's name is Eugene.He is 33 years old. He works as the military and for the conscientious service receives awards. Also he knows how to cook tasty

7)My brother's name is Yaroslav. He is 9 years old. He is studying in grade 4. Yaroslav engaged in karate. He likes to play online games on your computer.

8)My name is Lena. I'm 17 years old. I moved up to grade 11. Two years ago he graduated from music school, piano class. I love to read books and to travel.

9)at our dacha, live two dogs whose name is Timothy and Zhora .

10)We have a garden in which a variety of flowers, vegetables and berries.

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