правильно ли перевела на англ? внутри

(web studio) September 2014 g.- at this moment
– Sales/Account manager an active search for customers, including telemarketing ("cold
calls" (20-40 per day); visits to
private meetings with clients (5-7 per week); presentation of the company's
services to the customers; work with CRM: case management after the sale,
correspondence with clients, work with the development team. The first sale of
the company was made. The company - startup. Most of all I liked communication
and meetings with clients, sphere of the company.

Achievements: The
start of sales in the company's startup, system construction and sales
methodology