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My favourite place in Astrachan is the Kremlin. Situated in the centre of the city. It is very beautiful and big. The Kremlin is popular place. You can see trees and greenary there. There are a lot of mans, womans and children. My family and I usually walk on Sanday there.It is my favourite place because there feel thoroughly rested. My family and I relax, enjoy fresh air and peace and quet. We are eat ice creame and drink juice. 
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Евгений Кравцов · Accepted Answer

>>Situated in the centre of the city 
It is Situated in the citie's centre 
 
>>There are a lot of mans, womans and children 
Менов и вуменов во множественном числе разве так пишут? 
 
>>Sanday 
Sunday 
 
>>We are eat ice creame and drink juice. 
We eat ice cream and drink juice and sometimes beer

Юлия Бобрышева · Answer

My favourite place in Astrachan is the Kremlin, situated in the 
centre of the city. It is big and very beautiful. The Kremlin is a 
popular place. You can see trees and greenary there. There 
are a lot of men, women and children. My family and I usually 
walk there on Sunday. It is my favourite place because there 
I feel just rested. My family and I relax, enjoy peace, fresh air 
and quet. We usually eat ice cream and drink juice.