Проверьте текст по английскому!
One day, in the afternoon, I was coming back from school. Only an old woman was walking slowly in the street and it was strange that I didn't see anybody else in the lunch lime because usually, when I come back from school there're a lot of and people cars. So, how I've already said, it was strange but I continued walking. When only about a hundred metres left to go to my home, I suddenly saw a car which was going very fast right to the woman. She was crossing the road. She frightened when she saw the car and instead of running away, she continued standing and looking at the car.
I knew I had to do something quickly. I ran to the woman and I took her hand and tried to lead away from the road. She was too old to run away and we didn't have time because the car was very close and I decided to take the woman in my arms. She didn't resist. I was running very fast. While I was putting the woman on the ground, the car suddenly crashed into pole. It was the horrible accident. But I was happy because I saved woman's life. Meanwhile, the emergency services arrived.
In the end, I got home and told my family about the accident. But they didn't believe me. A few days later, the police officer came to our home and thanked me for saving the woman. The family understood that my story was real and praised me, too. It's a nice feeling to know you've saved someone's life!
Там опечатка (3я строчка) ...there're A LOT OF PEOPLE AND CARS
Мне не нужны переводы гугловские! А проверка построения предложений, ошибки, если есть!